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| Reviewed by richard cederberg |
5/12/2006 |
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| I enjoyed the subtleness of this piece Elga, your fine wordstrokes thrusting and moving up and down through the valleys and peaks of a mysterious process that continues to ebb and flow but is never fully quenched or, as you put it, satiated. The last word "needs" assuredly leaves one elevated in a place where we know that love, and the making of it, is always unfolding and never really completely satisfied. Thank-you |
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| Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen |
2/21/2006 |
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Wonderfully conveyed sensuality, Elga.
Now please pass the cigarettes, Elizabeth! ;-)
Peace,
Carolyn |
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| Reviewed by E. Lucas-Taylor |
2/21/2006 |
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And THAT is a 3 cigarrette poem.
Very passionate and lovely to read. |
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| Reviewed by Only A Poet |
2/21/2006 |
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| a very warm and effective love poem, well penned as usual Lady Elga. |
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| Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen |
2/19/2006 |
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I feel such joy, yet a lack, Elga, within your words. Or, I feel fully satiated...
I like to read 'first lines' of poems, to see the interior stucture, or the last lines, as it were. All lines in this piece lead to passion, yet, the words 'aspiring' tells me much, or, does it?
Always, though, I bathe in your emotion-seductive wordsmithing.
Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
2/19/2006 |
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Beautiful write Elga..no stunning!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Chrissy McVay |
2/19/2006 |
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| Beautiful and ardourouss! |
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| Reviewed by Bill Broome |
2/19/2006 |
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... With the slight gentle touch of... not quite yet... going there... arbour rushes life along at its own pace.
How well you do this with words and imaging! - Bill
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| Reviewed by Joyce Hale |
2/19/2006 |
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Well-done! Beautiful, passionate and delicate!
Peace. |
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| Reviewed by Paul Williams |
2/19/2006 |
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A very sensous and passionate piece, beautiful as always Elga.
Paul;-) |
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| Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*ฎ |
2/19/2006 |
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Elga,
Your sensuous and beautiful poem is a perfect match for the Milton quote.
Love & Light,
Joseph |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
2/19/2006 |
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lovingly erotic with a taste of the best romance has to offer.
Felix |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
2/19/2006 |
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Elga,
This is absolutely stunning! Very well done; brava!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
2/18/2006 |
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| a sensuous beauty ... |
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| Reviewed by Sherry Heim |
2/18/2006 |
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Passionate and perfect, Elga, this is a beautiful poem!
Take care,
Sherry |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
2/18/2006 |
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Elga,
This is gloriously written, such emotion, such passion. Yes. I love this one! Well done!
(((HUGS))), Karla. |
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