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Delectable Repleteness
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~Indigo~ Elga
Saturday, March 04, 2006
Rated "PG13" by the Author.
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| Delectable Repleteness
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Let’s feel and taste our words
Infiltrate profoundly through our beings
Rousing senses like the breaking dawn
Alive, as we feel the day begin
Your lips like the soothing morning sunshine
Mine the open window, allowing warmth to filter in
Let our hands like flowing streams
Meander along gentle dips and vales
To experience our tactility
Upon our hot desiring skins
Trace my contours with your cotton candy kisses
A sweet and lingering trail to mountain peaks
Within we feel a rumbling drumbeat
Reverberate as we draw closer, feel the heat!
Bodies feast and feed our hungry souls
Fluttering in unifying motion
To heights of delectable repleteness
Content for now, heaving sighs...
Satiated...
© Elga ~Indigo~
4 March 2006 – All rights reserved
05H17AM
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
3/10/2006 |
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Elga,
This soft write leaves me satiated; BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
3/9/2006 |
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| simply beautiful, Elga ... a joy for the senses as well as the spirit ... |
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| Reviewed by Phillip William Allen |
3/9/2006 |
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| A truly captivating pen Elga. |
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| Reviewed by Only A Poet |
3/6/2006 |
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| so very captivating! |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
3/5/2006 |
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Woooooooo hoooo this is spectacular in its baltant erotica tempered with deep emotional drama, the picture reaches out and grabs your attention but the words bring you into their world. Well done Elga.
Felix |
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| Reviewed by Chrissy McVay |
3/5/2006 |
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| Erotic and beautiful... |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
3/5/2006 |
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As always just the best heartfelt poetry!!
Well done sis!!
love Tinka |
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