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Velvet Nights of Us
by Peter Paton
Friday, October 13, 2006
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“We have within ourselves
Enough to fill the present day with joy,
And overspread the future years with hope.”


William Wordsworth



Come on aboard

I am just waiting for you

you know I am the one

that can make you complete

as the stars drift across the night sky

so you will merge totally with me

on a voyage of endless possibilities

where the prairie grass remains green

and the soft awakening of dawn

steals across your gentle heart

like the blue heron on its flight

we will sail to distant shores

where moonbeams are our cover

and the dancing surf ripples the shore

I will bring you eternal happiness

as we walk hand in hand

and listen to the lilt of God's music

playing deep within our hearts

our love is immaculate and pure

formed in the chrysalis of time

we will paint the perfect picture

on the open canvas of our lives


Copyright by Peter Paton 2006
Velvet Nights of Us

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Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
Poetic your velvet words. Lilt of God's music.
Lovely canvas Peter
Lady Mary Ann
Reviewed by Michelle Mills
How incredibly lovely Peter. "We will paint the perfect picture on the open canvas of our lives". A beautifully romantic piece. Thank you for sharing it. Blessings, Michelle
Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher
A beautiful invitation to let go, drift with the moment without worry.
Love and Peace, B&R
Reviewed by Chrissy McVay
Love the photo.

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot
Romance Plus...
Definately a double take here :)
Loved it
Reviewed by jude forese
eloquent, charming and soulful pen ...
Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Perfect, perfect, perfect comes to mind.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Peter you outdid yourself with this gem!You did paint the perfect picture. It is so beautifully described with the colors of divinity,I want it!!!;-)Thanks for sharing your poetic genuis Peter!

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Blimey the scotish charm, and winning at football, unlike a team further south. Pure masterclass romance..

And you dad was on Churchills ship, blimey....
Reviewed by Aria Aven
I can't imagine any woman not wanting these words said to her, simply lovely.

Reviewed by Sherry Heim
This is the finest of romance; I let go a sweet sigh as I read the final line. Very nice poem, Peter, and one for my library.
Take care,
Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Gossamer and breathtaking in its precision and scope, Peter. You merge the heavens and the heart seamlessly on this poetic canvas and fully paint every shade and nouance of the character of true love. Enduring and timeless. Just beautiful! TY K xx
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

You have penned a beauty here; very well done! BRAVO!

(((HUGS))) and mcuh love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D
Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Brautiful haven in this canyon of bliss. You have that tender touch so important to harmony in a love affair.

My best to you Peter.
Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia


Your poetry is so brilliant, it is always equivalent to a set of floodlights, pouring out their light, at the feet of the subject[s].

Love&Blessings, Rhonda
Reviewed by Denise Contreras
Beautiful and touching thanks
Hugs Angela
Reviewed by J M
"Open Canvas of our life"
Beautriful poetry and the imagery twined in verses made for a loving ode..... When it is right it is right and velvet right from heaven...

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
An engaging invitation painted on a backdrop of superb imagery. Thank you for sharing this offering, Peter. Love and peace to you,

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen
this is glorious!!
Reviewed by Felix Perry
This verse certainly paints the perfect picture with Kodak snapshot like quality in each line. Well done.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Most beautiful picture you painted today Peter!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow
Your closing lines 'we will paint the perfect picture
on the open canvas of our lives' is so classic and so lovely!
Such spectacular imagery in this piece...

Reviewed by George Carroll
Your words paint a romantic journey with your loved one.
Reviewed by richard cederberg
Sir Peter ...

Who could ever resist an invitation as such. And that watershed ... most assuredly a place that Michele and I would love to explore. It reminds me of terrain in north Prescott Arizona.

Your use of simile in the lines:

"steals across your gentle heart
like the blue heron on its flight"

Was resplendent. So few words - such a magnificent canvas you paint of a loving heart at peace with his life. This was exceptional!

Thankyou ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg
Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
The imagery is a perfect painting. You took me with you on a wonderful voyage. Victor
Reviewed by Miss Pandora
This resonates as a beautiful spiritual chord...that will strike many hearts I am sure. What a fabulous picture you always paint for the reader dear Peter. Love Panda :)
Reviewed by CJ Heck
... and so you did, Peter. This is no less radiant than artistic oils on a painter's canvas of God's own rainbow, a painting so vivid and beautiful, and with mere words. Lovely.
Reviewed by Taylor Ryan
Ever the master of the blend of nature's beauty and fascination, the hum of God in your heart, and the wondrous warmth and beauty of romance. may these always be your journeys and your joy.
Love and admiration,
Reviewed by Sandie Angel
Wow!!!!! Peter, this is so romantic and so promising!!!!! Wonderful write indeed!!!!!

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
Reviewed by Linda Dousay
Wow! That is beautiful, Peter...and the picture is breathtaking!

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