|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|..."when you have once loved, you never stop loving" beautiful sentiments-a lovely write|
|Reviewed by Chrissy McVay
|Reviewed by Gwendolyn Thomas Gath
Heart rendering and magnificently delivered Peter.
The love grows with each beat of a heart I truely wish all could experience such love Peter...this love that you speak.
Simply a beautiful and well constructed write, it plays music to my ears~I hear the melody.
Wishing great joy to your heart and soul,
Have a blessed holiday season thank you~Gwendolyn
|Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow
|I cannot begin to tell you how this piece touched me, my friend..especially the last line...
|Reviewed by Miss Pandora
|what a way you have ...capturing enduring love that cannot be denied superbly here...such strength shines out here dear Peter. Your light is bright...wonderful to be reading you again. Love and hugs Panda :)|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|a pasionately endearing and spirit provoking poem that brings the heart to a flowing state of peace ...|
|Reviewed by Connie Faust
|Peter, what can I add to this magnificent writing of yours, except to say "amen" to every comment below.
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|Close no matter how far apart, smooooth peter..|
|Reviewed by A PAX
|The yearning and wonder of a love parted
ahhh agony lol
but told with such heart
loved the line....dna
ahhh so true
|Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks
|How compassionate and committed this love is. Peter, you have captured the quintessential meaning of love...beautifully explained!
'Tis a keeper...
|Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
|You Do Have Way With Writing Romance None I've Seen Yet A D...
|Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
|Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia
Only one thought lingered, upon reading this jewel...'Lost in Paradise'..is not lost, at all.
Another of your inimitable writes, Sir Paton!
|Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero
|Your spirit comes through this work. Those we love, and those we don't, but particularly the ones who left a positive mark in our hearts, are forever with us. Thank you, Peter.
|Reviewed by J M
|To have loved and then be parted for whatever reasons is emotional as this one for me to read. Powerful and beautiful penning here Peter.....
I was so blessed to read the expressed emotions in moving poetry.
|Reviewed by Joyce Hale
|Ah Peter, how true. Everyone we love throughout our lives leaves their footprints on our souls.
I love the line, *the dna of love, forever entombed within our souls
Excellent write. Peace. Joyce
|Reviewed by richard cederberg
|Sir Peter the Magnificent ...
Just a delightful write my friend. Filled with insight, wisdom, and love. The essence of your heart for your soul mate illumines the pages of the fine letters for eternity.
"so I my beloved, move endlessly around your orbit
configurations of blinding emotions, known only to us"
reveals the deep and abiding emotional and spiritual connection you have with your love. You are a blessed man dear friend.
In deep admiration ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg
|Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*®
I believe that whenever we touch someone (whether physically, mentally or spiritually), we are forever changed. Your poem reminds me of this.
Love & Light always and in all ways,
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|Splendid write in the Peter Paton style that is a joy to read.|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Beautiful poetry Peter!!
|Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
|When love puts its patrner on a pedestal and gives it all the best, it is selfless and will last forever, no matter what troubles might arise. Excellent poem. Victor|
|Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
|Breathtaking in its very personal meanings about that 'special
|Reviewed by CJ Heck
|Peter, this is so loving, so beautiful. Well done, my friend. I really enjoyed this. Those we love who are gone really are forever in our hearts, no matter how much time elapses.
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
This is soooo beautiful!!!
Sandie Angel a.k.a. Sandie May Angel :o)
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|the dna of love, forever entombed within our souls
Quite profound, Peter - and quite a poem.