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You Take My Breath Away
by Anniemoh Ohio
Wednesday, March 23, 2005
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...controlling me, refusing to let go...

You take my breath away
Gasping for air Ďtil Iím blue in the face
I reach for relief but itís nowhere to be found
No true solution to the dilemma within
So cruel you are, casting your spell on me
Controlling me, refusing to let go
Holding me back from the things I truly love
Everything I have done to avoid you has failed
Every prevention I have taken was all a waste
Because youíre still here today
And yesterday, and the day before
And the day before that
Battling to keep me in your domain
I will continue to fight, though
As I know your days are numbered
I will drink another cup of Nyquil
I will swallow another antibiotic
And soon your every cell will be destroyed!

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Reviewed by jude forese 3/25/2005
excellent rememdy!
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 3/25/2005
Great response to illness! To know oneself is healthy is also another way of getting rid of illness. Great write.
Reviewed by John Bidwell 3/25/2005
This is so cool.
I hope you'll be feeing better real quick.
Happy Easter,
John
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) 3/25/2005
Blimey I'm seeing double. Mundy Mundy, oh mundy morning turned out that way, but........(Thinks... I know you hear that everyday)
Cold sure ain't funny. Well not if you're a bloke cos we think we're dying. But they sure can knock one out for a while.

Chicken pox in the mouth.(Andy: refrains from stating the obvious juvenile joke)
Reviewed by Danielle Mundy 3/24/2005
damn..guess it did turn out to be strep LOL hope you feel better soon, SM (Step-mommy), and just keep reminding yourself that you COULD have had what Kelsey came down with LOL imagine chicken pox in the mouth..yuck!!!
Reviewed by D May (Reader) 3/24/2005
Get well soon...Gotta love NyQuil. Big "N" Little 'y'..and a a big fu*&%$#. "Q" The green monster! I think George Carlin said that. Nothing like a NyQuil buzz when you can't breathe.
Reviewed by Alain Gracio 3/24/2005
clever and inventive. Hope you get over it soon.
Cheers
Alain
Reviewed by Sue Hess 3/24/2005
i had a visit from this one not long ago too...an unwanted quest that keeps coming back...this was a great poem
Reviewed by m j hollingshead 3/24/2005
well done
Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers 3/24/2005
Keep that Nyquil close at hand..sometimes when that demon flu strikes it's all that keeps us comatose long enough to get over it!
Hope you get to feeling better real soon!

Lisa
Reviewed by Phillip William Allen 3/24/2005
Bad cold huh? What ever it is I hope you get well
Reviewed by Barbara Terry 3/24/2005
And soon your every cell will be destroyed! Not soon enough for some Anne. Thnx this brought back many sad days I lie loveless in my bed, because of my tears and fears. Even when I was home, as a child, I had no love. Very good write Anne, thnx for sharing. May the Lord be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy tot he world, peace on earth, & (((HUGS))), Barbie

"If I have to...Then I may as well be."


Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen 3/23/2005
Oh, very good indeed!
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 3/23/2005
Are we gonna quit this love addicted thing? God. This poem of yours "slaps me in the face" in reality therapy. Thank you. Love and peace to you and I can so relate. Regis
Reviewed by Cynthia Borris 3/23/2005
Anne,

This was fantastic! What a twist.

Cynthia
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