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| Reviewed by Donald Beaulieu |
9/26/2007 |
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| What power, what allusions, such passion, such aguish, but no fear only a compassionate tear. You see clearly and feel deeply. May the power of "The Light" continue to guide you and sustain you. |
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| Reviewed by Miss Pandora |
11/10/2006 |
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| Layers of imagery, poignant message superbly captured. An incredible piece with depth and strength of spirit positively oozing. Absolutely nothing that could be forgotten about this work. Panda :) |
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| Reviewed by H. Lena Jones |
10/10/2006 |
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Another spectacular poem, Nordette. Still this madness will not stop, for man cannot do it by himself. We much with patience await the coming of our Lord and Savior...He will judge accordingly...only then will man have peace and eternal joy...Amen, come Lord Jesus!
Keep reminding us, Nordette, you are the voice of one crying in the wilderness!
God Bless you, precious lady,
Love, Lena |
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| Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia |
9/10/2006 |
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Praise The LORD! A spectacular write, Nordette! How very gifted you are, in bringing forth this powerful truth.
Bless you,
Rhonda |
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| Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® |
8/21/2006 |
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Dear Nordette,
I believe this poem to be a masterpiece ... surely one of your very best. I could feel the tears rolling down your cheek and the anguish within your heart. You are a poet of passion and compassion.
Love & Light,
Joseph |
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| Reviewed by ~ Chanti |
8/18/2006 |
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Hopefully through your voice, others will learn to listen to that 'still, small voice' once again.
A magnificent write Nordette.
Chanti |
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
8/18/2006 |
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| "In and then out of skin"... like blessed spiritual breathing this is, a detox of consciousness and good conscience. Love the hook lines, building to the excellent finale. The still small voice, as we know, can be the most compelling and insistent when it has struck its chord. Excellently conceived and crafted as per.u: esoteric, alchemic and yet visceral and grounded in humanity. A curious blending of the psyche. TY LOL Kate xx |
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| Reviewed by Paul Williams |
8/18/2006 |
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All the small voices will become one shout, and when they do, we will shake the universe and it will hear. There are so many wonderful lines in this Nordette I'm at a loss to pick my fav...needless to say it's totally Excellent!
Paul;-)
Aka Sparky, coming your way soon lol. |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
8/18/2006 |
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"When will he awaken from the
gold, silver, and diamond spectacle of his dream..."
perhaps never ...
thoughtful and well written ... |
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| Reviewed by Taylor Ryan |
8/17/2006 |
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Small voice crying in the darkess for one candle to ignite the reality in the dreamers closed eye...
I hear you Nordette.
Love, Taylor |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
8/17/2006 |
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Exceptional writing Nordette,but that's nothing new for you!
I love your originality! Inspired!
Eileen |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
8/17/2006 |
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This is indeed a magnificent poem all around, Nordette. Thank you for sharing your gift. Love and peace to you,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Linda Luna (Reader) |
8/17/2006 |
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Powerful message, well-crafted prose. You are a gift, Nordette.
I will share this one broadly...as voice to dissent.
LL* |
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| Reviewed by Chrissy McVay |
8/17/2006 |
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| Wonderful! |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) |
8/17/2006 |
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"When will you awaken from the Madison Avenue mink of this dream?"
Ah, yes indeed, this is a major problem with any developing youth, the glitter, the sparke and gold and all that with it. It has plagued mankind even before there was a Madison Avenue, but after thatm it has just taken off. I fell prey to its charm, I know whereof I sppeak. Hell of a poem, Nordette. |
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| Reviewed by K. Mulroney |
8/17/2006 |
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| Not forgotten by all I assure you!! I hear ya loud and clear and think this was awesome! |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
8/17/2006 |
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A thought provoking write!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
8/17/2006 |
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Nordette,
The still, small Voice will not lead you wrong; it is intuition, some say, some say it is the Voice of God. Whatever it is, I will listen and obey. An excellent, thought provoking write; thank you!
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. |
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| Reviewed by richard cederberg |
8/17/2006 |
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Nordette ...
You and I are on the same page today. People need to train their ears to hear that still small voice. He is always speaking wisdom and direction to those that will hear and obey.
A very relevant and timely write.
In fraternity ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg |
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