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| Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope) |
11/25/2006 |
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What a fantastic poem, Nordette. It surely has blown me away
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| Reviewed by Art Sun |
11/24/2006 |
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An expression of depth here Nordette...the dreamstate can wash away the river of tears and spatterd blood....yet the sunlight still awakens the singing of the morn and the passions that lay there within....very nice...enjoyed...
Art Sun..... |
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
11/22/2006 |
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| The mind is an amazing thing when it awakens us spontaneously like this... doesn't happen to me that often, but can relate to and identify the voice that you use here: the soul has the most haunting and lyrical lilt. And so like the soul to require us to walk barefoot that stony riverbed to weld the marks of stones into the soft arch of our tender instep. Soothing and disturbing in equal measure, Nordette. And Rivers of Babylon-Biblical, perhaps, in its overtones and undercurrents. Beautiful poetry! TY K xx |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bowling |
11/21/2006 |
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Beautiful write full of romance, imagery, and full of passion. Great write!
Blessings and Happy Holidays,
Joyce Bowling |
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| Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader) |
11/21/2006 |
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A really marvelous, succinct yet powerful with images, piece of art...Nordette. Just that first line alone knocked me on my backside.
So potent...or should I say 'poet-ent?'
You are certainly a Queen of Scribes! |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
11/20/2006 |
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passion may be a withered prune but hopefully it can keep you moving to life's movement ...
sad yet soul-stirring ... excellent images, Nordette ... |
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| Reviewed by Maryvonne Chartrand |
11/20/2006 |
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Your verses play on my soul strings, Nordette; most compelling sentiments. Thank you for sharing this offering. Love and peace to you,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) |
11/20/2006 |
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The muddy bed would wake me.
I guess one can dry oneself tearless.
Great images, passion is a prune huh.. |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
11/20/2006 |
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Great musing here Nordette!!
Guess what played your "interview" with William and our poetry readings to family and friends yesterday!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Peter Paton |
11/20/2006 |
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Nordette
I can neither add or subtract from Richard's astute and shrewd observations below..
God Bless
Peter |
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| Reviewed by Carole Mathys |
11/20/2006 |
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A fabulous poem, Nordette...nice way to wake up
Carole |
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| Reviewed by SaPAth AnANd |
11/20/2006 |
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What a lovely inspiration,Nordette!!Great imagery,beautiful write.
Bom Bhole!
Roshan
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
11/20/2006 |
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Superb imagery in this correlated poem of love and nature. Bittersweet,beautifully articulated, Nordette!
Love,
Eileen |
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| Reviewed by richard cederberg |
11/20/2006 |
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I would imagine, Nordette, that strolling down that river-bed one would encounter much more than withered plums.
I am sure one would not have to dig too far to find the corpses of many good intentions enshrouded in fine talent.
I have discovered, in my limited experience on this planet, that everyone has lack in their life, in one form or another.
Far too often, it seems, this lack is the basic human essential love and the ability to communicate to the betterment of both parties.
Methinks that superbia (unreasonable or inordinate self-esteem, personified as one of the deadly sins) plays a substantial role in all those areas desiccated in ones life.
Light and Wisdom ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg |
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| Reviewed by Constance Gotsch |
11/20/2006 |
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| Reminds me of struggling homward on foot on a bitter winter day because you can't afford a car, and colleagues driving past you because they're upset with you. |
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| Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson |
11/20/2006 |
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reminds me of crisp clean sheets that when you roll over or rather strecth a leg or an arm to the other side you feel the coolness of no-one laying there
outstanding!!!! |
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| Reviewed by CJ Heck |
11/20/2006 |
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This poem says so much, Nordette -- you certainly wake with inspiration. Wish I could do that! Very nice poem.
Hugs and respect,
CJ |
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| Reviewed by Gwendolyn Thomas Gath |
11/20/2006 |
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"A Stroll Down the Riverbed"
Beautiful Nordette!
Also I just read your "Love Divine Whispers Peace"
Tribute to Gerald LaVert what a jewel!
Thank you for offering these lovely works of inspirations.
I know you miss your music already, but you can still listen to it.
Have a wonderful day and continue in the love and inspirations, but most of all joy in your heart,
From the Heart of an Artist Quiet Storm
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