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Come on Daddy
by Mary Lynn Plaisance
Thursday, March 09, 2006
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Let's walk in the rain.

Come on Daddy

If you could, would you take a walk with me in the rain?
It might ease some of your pain.
If you could, would you dine with me on sandy beaches?
It might cause you to learn what they teach ya.

If you could, would you tell me a bedtime story?
It might bring to you an ounce of glory.
Why can't you get off of your throne of glee?
To become the person you were meant to be.

If you tried it, you would feel the joy,
Of  being able to help me become a regular boy.
Come on Daddy, let's try it,
Leave the bottle there, you won't regret it a bit.

(C) 2006 Mary Lynn Plaisance


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Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher 3/10/2006
Lovely, and sad at the same time. Wonderful work,
Birgit and Roger
Reviewed by Chrissy McVay 3/10/2006
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 3/10/2006
Symbolically powerful and real; thank you for sharing this gift, Mary Lynn. Amour et paix à toi,

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 3/10/2006

You take the reader by the hand and show them compassion in this strongly emotional write--well done!

(((HUGS)))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers 3/10/2006
Mary Lynn,
This is really sad but reveals the truth too many have to live with every day.
Substance abuse is running rampant in this world, and so many lives are destroyed that one could never take an acurate count.
Wonderful message here Mary Lynn.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 3/10/2006

Powerful write; very well done; BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) 3/10/2006
Some good points to consider within the body of this poem. he bottle has taken over far too many lives. It is a shame.

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