|Reviewed by Masood Lohar
|These "Whys" truely refelect all those unanswered questions brewing in the hearts of all us mortals. It is indeed very nice and origenal
|Reviewed by Sandra Mushi
|I'm so pathetic with relationships since I can't and wouldn't want someone to have this much control over me. I posted The Caged Tiger after a friend had psycho analysed me and dared me to look deep inside myslef. It wasn't easy but it was worth it. I had me own "whys" - and it gave me the answers. Enjoyed this immensely, Amira! Well penned!
|Reviewed by Safi Abdi
|Enjoyable read! But I say, move on...life is full of surprises...
|Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
|but you can't wait for him too......
enjoyed the piece felt real and question we all have will do tackle
love yourself and blank the whys
the answer will come, oneday
hopefully before the questions fall into another lap
|Reviewed by Jane Rodway
|As I reading this I was thinking, because you love him! And I thought about how I feel for my honey. So, it was sad when I got to the end to see he doesn't realize:( I hope he does soon for you because it sounds like your heart is in the right place. Very relatable write, good work.|
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|Beautiful, loved this true and honest poem, outstanding,
|Reviewed by Sara Coslett
|Amira, I can relate to this so well. It is never easy knowing if and when to let go. Especially when you are as deeply in love as you describe. I wish there were easy answers. ~ Sara|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Change the "him" to "her" and this poem fits me perfectly, Amira. How I can relate! Thank you. Love and peace. Regis|
|Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
|WHY: The Only Question (God) Will Ask You In Judgement_
As For Physical Love--WHY: Weakness Is Self Destruction Of The Your Heart
Means You Ask For It,i.e. More Pain...
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Awwwwwwww You can only hope and pray
for him to find out
that you truly love him.
I Agree 100% with you on this one!!
|Reviewed by Handsum Hart
|Darn that love, it just doesn't like following the rules of logic.
I hope things work out for you.
|Reviewed by A PAX
|I think love is like breathing sometimes
It just is!
peace to you.........
|Reviewed by Sue Hess
|why not tell him and see what happens. i think the reason i have always been afraid of love is that i don't want someone else to have this much control over my life, and the cost is that i am sometimes lonely but some things are deeply rooted|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Amira I echo every word!;-) Superb plaintive poem!
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|Why not? Love when you can, who you can and how you can...it does not come often enough for some...Find Peace, Ed & rufuz|