The Sky is Blue
by Dana Reed
Wednesday, October 17, 2007
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The sky is blue,
The sunset is pink,
When I write poetry,
It really stinks.
I try as hard as anyone can,
But I use a pencil instead of a pen,
To have an eraser is nothing short of joy,
To destroy the passages that no one would enjoy.
To think as a kid a poem I did write,
For my summer camp that everyone liked,
They put it to music--Old Langs Syne,
And sang it to me in the proper rhyme.
I should have ended this long ago,
But at least it's rhyming so on I go,
But I think I'll end now while I'm ahead,
Before they stone me and leave me for dead.
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| Reviewed by Samata Shrestha |
1/28/2011 |
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| It's awesome like your profile pic.... ^_^ |
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| Reviewed by John Domino |
7/8/2008 |
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I like it! You are funny!
You have a GREAT sence of humor.
Signed,
alias - Mickey Mouse |
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| Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse |
4/13/2008 |
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lol-fun read Dana!!
Embraced ~ Embrassé
Vickie |
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| Reviewed by Walt Hardester |
10/19/2007 |
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"But I would not feel so all alone,
Everybody must get stoned."......Bob Dylan
Walt |
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| Reviewed by Wm. Hammond |
10/18/2007 |
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...And it got better as it went.
Keep it up. |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
10/17/2007 |
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Awwww! This is just terribly sweet. How could anyone even think of stoning you....
Be safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by Randall Barfield |
10/17/2007 |
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| It is cute. and sweet. |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) |
10/17/2007 |
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ROFL...how do you think the rest of us started?
Cute one.
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