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Fallen
by Danielle Mundy

Wednesday, July 21, 2004
Rated "PG13" by the Author.
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Please forgive this poem. I wrote it when I was like 15, but it's some of that dark poetry I talked about in my bio.

He came to me when the lights went out
and darkness claimed the land.
Cold breath blew through my hair
icy fingers stroked my hands.
All of my senses were disabled and
I longed to regain my sight.
For who was before me kneeling
was the god of the color of night.

Then suddenly some light was cast
upon the shadowed ground.
And the blowing wind through the trees
became a defening sound.
Then he stood and cast his cloak
and never before was there a sight
as the hideous red-scaled skin
of the god of the color of night.

He sat upon my chest and
with steel fingers he had bound
me to the altar that which
was never common ground.
He whispered to me words of pleasure,
and of promise and delight.
But never was I more leery
Of the god of the color of night.

Then he slid over me with
the agility of a snake.
Telling of things he was to do,
all the things he would take.
Creeping ever slowly he knelt at my side
whispering of wrongs he longed right.
And as he soothed me I lay there
Begging to my god of the color of night.

Then he came upon me
and I had no second chance
for when his lies quit coming
we commenced the pagan's dance.
And then our souls melded
as he cried with delight
but when he finished I lay there
Weeping to my god of the color of night.

Then his words ceased sounding
quite as comforting as before.
His black lips formed a smile
as he asked me to dance once more.
Then my heart saddened
as the dark gave way to light.
For I knew I'd burn for dancing
with my god of the color of night.

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Reviewed by Amira van Kerk 7/29/2004
This is excellent.
Enjoyed this "dark write " very much.
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 7/28/2004
Wow very well written Danielle!!

Might be dark but excellently penned M'Lady!!

Love Tinka

Ps: Ya you may use ghrapics...Oh I borrow it too...guilty as charged...lol!!
Reviewed by Grim Jack (Reader) 7/22/2004
Well done. Quite a piece for a teen.
Reviewed by Martin Hebert 7/22/2004
Fantastic poem~~

~~martin~~
Reviewed by Anniemoh Ohio 7/22/2004
May be "dark," but it still is an excellent write. Great job!
Reviewed by Jeff Mason 7/22/2004
No apologies necessary for this beauty of a poem. Unnervingly darkly beautiful! -- Jeff
Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger 7/22/2004
A powerful realization of what happens to the conscious body and mind, whenever one darns to dance with the Demon of Darkness. Excellent work, Poet. Thanks for sharing it.
Reviewed by Sandie Angel 7/22/2004
A very descriptive write of event and feelings within. Well-done!

Sandie May Angel
Reviewed by Paul Berube 7/22/2004
Danielle,
Awesome poem. Very dark and soul destructive.
Reviewed by jude forese 7/22/2004
well done!
Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson 7/21/2004
This is really quite good, I enjoyed this imaginative read.
Allen



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