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Awakening (Bobbi's Challenge)
by Danielle Mundy

Saturday, February 18, 2006
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I sit in the KITCHEN alone
the latest attempt to NURSE my wounds
sitting empty on the table
I followed their DATED ADVICE
allowing the beast within to sleep
but I can feel the malevolence churning
as DARKNESS spreads lonely tendrils
enveloping the night SKY in her sanctity.
The DREAM was real
my DRESS soiled in his essence
lured by a predator's GRACE
the seductive attraction of an ANGELFISH
relentlessly stalking her prey
The beast raises its head once more
the STING of desire overcoming reason
craving his blood like CAFFIENE
needing those soft ROSE petal lips
to turn pale and COLORLESS
I am EMBROILED in its power
in its desires
and I give in
a chilling LAUGH ensuing
gradually fading away
to the howls of a lunatic
as I slip out into the night

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Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy 2/19/2006
You have proved that Vampires are people too. Good write and a unique use of the words. Well done.

Bobbi
Reviewed by Regina Pounds 2/18/2006
ah, this is the second response to the challenge I read..excellently done!

Gina
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 2/18/2006
Danielle,

WOW!!!!!!! Fantastic response to the challenge; I enjoyed the darkness in this one. Well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 2/18/2006
Very well done !!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by E T Waldron 2/18/2006
AWESOME! Danielle, so glad you did the challenge I agree it is the best!Your mood may not be kind to you, but it is fabulous for your poetry!;-)

Love,
Eileen
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) 2/18/2006
I believe this is the best one so far, you worked on this.
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