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Oblivious
by Danielle Mundy
Sunday, January 03, 2010
Rated "G" by the Author.
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the shadow blighting out your sun
lingers over me now
trapped in your sea of broken dreams
and I'd gladly drown in it
if you'd give me but a chance
but I'm hidden in that wasteland
where lost hopes lie in wait of rediscovery
and you can't save that which
you're just too blind to see
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) |
1/21/2010 |
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| A lost love poem that stands its ground, it isn't all woe is me, there is so comeback in your face there, and I like that . .. |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
1/4/2010 |
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this is definately stunning poetry with such force of meaning as to strike right to the heart before the brain...well done and good to see you back...
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| Reviewed by Darryn Murphy |
1/4/2010 |
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| great poem |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
1/3/2010 |
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The intended recipient of these sentiment is sure fortunate. Your verses make me dizzy. I wish they were meant for me, Danielle. Love and best wishes,
just me, Regis |
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