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| Reviewed by Lois Christensen |
4/25/2008 |
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Some days we must make our own sunshine, which isn't too hard to do. It shines within our hearts and God lets us know it. Many days are dreary , but sunshine comes to us as needed and we make it so.
Thanking God for the sun moon and stars too. |
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| Reviewed by m j hollingshead |
11/18/2007 |
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| well done |
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| Reviewed by Fania Simon |
2/14/2007 |
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The Absence of Sunlight
Here I am
The sun
That warms
The earth
Yet in me,
Mortals find fault
Until their last breath
Here I am
They cry I'm "too hot"
They shout, I "cause drought"
And so I stay absent
And sent them clouds instead.
But still they nag.
They just don't
Get
It
Yet!
©2007 The absence of the sunlight
Inspired by your poem "Lady Sunlight"
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| Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader) |
2/12/2007 |
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| Enjoyed very much! Holly |
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| Reviewed by Crissy Foster |
1/20/2007 |
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Just don't wait to long. Poeple can turn into something you don't wish to know.
:) Great poem. You have a gift.
Crissy Foster
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| Reviewed by Aleja Bennett |
6/27/2006 |
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| HERE I AM. (LAUGH) IT IS A PLEASURE TO READ SUCH FINE RTISTIC WORK, |
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| Reviewed by Amy Ramdass |
4/6/2006 |
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I am here, I am here... (~_*)
Kidding aside, I really love
your smooth flowing "Hello Lady Sunlight"...
Hope she touches you with her warmth
soon.
Amy Ramdass
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| Reviewed by Cynth'ya Reed |
1/18/2006 |
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Wonderful portrayal of the sun (or a form of writing for peace while going thru a stormy time in life--seeking light).
blessin's Bro. Manes,
cynth'ya lewis reed |
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| Reviewed by E. Lucas-Taylor |
1/5/2006 |
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Sunlight and a good attitude can cure anything.
Enjoyed the reading... |
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| Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green |
1/5/2006 |
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| L o v e l y <3 :) <3 |
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| Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson |
10/9/2005 |
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| I enjoyed this poem of appreciation! Well done! |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
10/9/2005 |
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| May the sun burn away the clouds that keep you from sharing the warmth it was intended to do. |
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| Reviewed by Sandie Angel |
8/23/2005 |
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Hi Mane:
A very delightful read. Hope you'll find your sunshind very soon.
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o) |
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