Hur - A poem by Newt
by Edwin Larson
Monday, March 21, 2005
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Newt wishes to thank Kate B. for opening his eyes to Hur.
NOTE: Newt's Bio can be found above at "Newt Here"
A seer from across the sea
Familiar with philosophy,
Suggested that I study Hur,
Found in the ancient books of Mii,
Hee-Hoo showed Himm-Howe
Gnu knowledge that Shi learned.
But these sages works are based
Upon the lessons taught by Hur.
Now I cannot put Hur down,
I even sleep with Hur at night.
I truly hope Shi doesn’t mind,
But Hur Kharma feels right.
And I really must be Gho-Ing,
For I have to leave Yu-Nao.
The vision I have gained from Hur
Has helped me see the light.
Copyright 2005 Questor Newtvision
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|Reviewed by andrea coltman
|Clever write Edwin, enjoyed...best wishes Andrea|
|Reviewed by Judith Pleasant
I reckon this is a goodun.
Very unique style. Makes me smile.
|Reviewed by M. B.
|Don't shoot me in the foot, but damn, I'm blown over. HUR is utterly unique and beautifully wrought. Extremely clever.
I love it!
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|Well knock me down with a blade of Bluegrass, this is a neat trick you have turned here, Edwin! In England, Newts have the misfortune of being labelled as permanently inebriated, but whether he was or not when he penned this shaft of illumination, it is still a mind-bendingly good thesis. What comes out of the back end of unicorns is not all... rubbish, after all! TY Kate xx|
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|Aw, shoot me in the foot, this is good.|
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|Enlightenment takes years of study and self examination, but Newt must have at least one leg up on the competition...Seek and ye shall find...Ed|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Newt, this is terrific , you are breaking gnu ground!;-)
I really like this EDL! Unique!