The Vision
by Dave Harm
Monday, October 11, 2004
Rated "G" by the Author.
Share
Print Save Become a Fan
The last few times that I've tried to put a poem about God in the den, I've taken a few "hits" and a few "good works." But earlier today, I was blasted. If anyone read it, I'm sorry, I was misunderstood. Now, I'm getting ready for bed and I NEED to let others see the God that I search for and wish to see. |
|
----------------------------
The sun, moon, and stars,
Were all aligned.
It was a magicial, mystical,
Space in time.
The planets joined in,
With a slow spin.
People on earth knew,
Something happened.
Old loves rekindled.
New loves found.
Birds chirped in,
With a trumpetting sound!
Fences mended...
Old grudges ended.
Undid to others,
What was undone to me.
Everyone living,
In peaceful harmony.
One church, one school,
Everyone living,
By the golden rule.
One leader, one nation,
Everyone joined...
In the celebration!
No anger, no hate,
No need to deliberate.
No reason for war,
Guns would be no more.
No al-Qaida, Towers still stand.
Just the brotherhood,
Sisterhood of man!
Everyone living in peace,
Enjoying God's great land.
Is this the vision,
He wants us to see?
Living together, as one,
Tranquil, happy, and free.
(c)2004 Dave Harm
|
|
Dave Harm
|
Want to review or comment on this
poem?
Click here to login!
Need a FREE Reader Membership?
Click here for your Membership!
|
| Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers |
10/12/2004 |
|
I wouldn't let the affects of the blasts upset you too much..when that happens..at the least you know that what you wrote struck a nerve.
Isn't that why we write in the first place? To be felt? Apparently you were.
Keep writing Dave...the blasphemy from others didn't stop Jesus now did it?
Lisa |
|
|
|
|