|Reviewed by Taylor Ryan
|Wake up, Wake up!! Of course they'll protect you.
|Reviewed by Chrissy McVay
|Wow... Halloween sometimes comes early.|
|Reviewed by L. Figgins
|Can dreams from the subconcious be sin? Oh don't think so sweet man. Just emotion wrestling with our logic and memory. But yes, angels of mercy can help put the demons to rest I think. Grand foreplay between good/evil...
|Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot
|Eeeeeek, nasty person is she, pray she begone and your dreams be sweet again.
|Reviewed by A. Santo
|Maybe you should put on a pot of strong coffee. :) If that doesn't work trying walking the floor, but whatever you do, keep that woman far from thought. ;) lol... I love this verse you conjured up.|
|Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher
|An excellent write! Hope you only have sweet dreams and no nightmares!
|Reviewed by jude forese
|the seductive battle between good and evil excellently portrayed ...|
|Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
|You have plenty of angels Fee. Your heart is golden and your compassion faultless. The man who I see is a gem with many facets. I really like this one too .You have quite a pallet for the ladies too.
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|Call on down those Angels, Felix... they will win every time!! They roll in like a mighty refreshing, cleansing ocean to kill the deadly fire when the heat's on. Lust can get out of control, I guess, but I think we focus on it too much, perhaps, as something that separates us from "godliness". God is passionate, creates all our passions in the natural sense and, if you get to feelin too bad... think of King David who God Himself describes as "a man after my own heart"... well, he messed up big time with Bathsheba, I guess - murder as well as the rest - but he was ultimately acquitted. You are a Big-Feelings man, Felix, and have great capacity for conscience: whether it shows up light or darkness, you are honest and true to it... a man after God's own heart, I'd say! :))
Sorry, I am trying hard atdemo not to get too much into "reply" mode as to how a poem affects me personally, but, in this instance, guess I am, as usual, carried away by my heart and enthusiasm. Your poetry is growing so much in depth, Pops. Good stuff! LOL K xx
|Reviewed by Peter Paton
I'll give that wicked lady a body swerve if you don't mind...:)
Anything for a quiet life !
|Reviewed by Linda Hill
|Brilliantly written, my friend. I am always awed by your talent. Keep writing!
|Reviewed by Susan Sonnen
|naturally, I'm all for the good guys winning...this is very, very clever, Felix, as well as well written. At least one of us is not totally stumped creatively tonight!