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| Reviewed by Chrissy McVay |
5/8/2007 |
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Good write.
Chrissy |
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| Reviewed by Kathryn Collins |
5/6/2007 |
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Dear Fee:
This writing is so a delight --
love me for my mind
but sex is so okay.
Now those two lines are winners!
love it.
hugs,
Kathy
P.S.
you are on a roll too.
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| Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow |
5/6/2007 |
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Yes it is indeed comfusing and complex..and at times seems to simple..
I like this piece..
Mryna |
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| Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) |
5/5/2007 |
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| Enjoyed very much,nice to see you back...Hugssss |
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| Reviewed by J M |
5/5/2007 |
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love is not a game wise Fee this was good.
Peace,
josie |
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| Reviewed by Karen Cino |
5/5/2007 |
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Love can turn into a game that we all play. The important thing is we should all express ourselves and say what we want to so that we don't get into a position to forget to say it. Excellent write.
~hugs~
Karen |
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| Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader) |
5/5/2007 |
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| I like this one, well said. Really is how it seems as I look back and can't remember what I did always not know...lol...Lady J |
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| Reviewed by Rose Rideout |
5/5/2007 |
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Felix, very interresting poem, remembering what we forget to say, and you are so right love is not a game. I really enjoyed it and yes we are so happy to have you back with us, really missed you.
Love your Cuz, Rose XOXO |
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| Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G |
5/5/2007 |
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This is deep and feeling Sweet Fee!
The flow was oncoming...
Hang IN!
Glad you are BACK! and Back to STAY! I missed your wordplay! :)
WArmly, WArrior Lady PURPLE Sheeeoox |
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| Reviewed by D Johnson |
5/5/2007 |
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Imagry, flow, word play, it was all there...good write.
Thanks,
Dan |
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| Reviewed by Morning Star |
5/5/2007 |
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Enjoyed the flow and the tone
and your well chosen words its nut really a game
its nice to play but it can hurt deeply!
To love is to live and give, some maybe
misleading but is therapy
Like poetry!!
Love And Peace to you my always
Your friend Morning Star...Yolie
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| Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury |
5/5/2007 |
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| I really enjoy the flow and meaning within this poem. |
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| Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg |
5/5/2007 |
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| Love is very much a game and it is meant to play |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
5/5/2007 |
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Well expressed Felix!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
5/5/2007 |
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(((Fee))),
Although not a game, it's wonderful to play. Your turn! Love this one.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :) |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
5/5/2007 |
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Good one, Fee; very well penned! BRAVO!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :) |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
5/5/2007 |
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It is like playing with fire without getting burn.
A swell one.
Georg |
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| Reviewed by Susan Sonnen |
5/5/2007 |
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| You express it here so well...how something so simple can become so complex~ |
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