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| Reviewed by Selena Dobbin-Gillis |
7/15/2007 |
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I think I know where this sad/dark write came from and I understand. But as time passes things get better.
Love you cuz |
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| Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg |
7/10/2007 |
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| dark and down, don't stay there too long |
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| Reviewed by D Johnson |
7/10/2007 |
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I agree with Karen V's remarks...
Peace,
Dan |
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| Reviewed by Tiana Jett (Reader) |
7/10/2007 |
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| Wow, I'm speechless ... I hope everything is OK, Fee ... Sending you love and light ... hugs |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
7/9/2007 |
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| a well written expression of grief in loss- |
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| Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader) |
7/9/2007 |
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| Be wonderful if you could say good bye to all the darkness and live only in the light. Makes for good writes the dark times I guess, but it is a sad feeling to know someones darkness. Lady J |
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| Reviewed by Susan de Vegter |
7/9/2007 |
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Sadly I know the scope/depth of this kind of goodbye. It leaves a lump in my stomach. Are you alright Fee?
Love,
Susan |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
7/9/2007 |
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Seem like we are on the same page today....ain't being a good day I guess!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Leysa Lowery |
7/9/2007 |
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| Ah, so sad ... |
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| Reviewed by Barbara Mercer |
7/9/2007 |
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| Your description stuns me Felix, waves of love }}}}}}}}} Barbara |
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| Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® |
7/9/2007 |
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Dear Fee,
It has been said that it is the darkest just before Dawn. Hoping and believing that your Dawn is coming soon.
Love & Light always and in all ways,
Joseph* |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
7/9/2007 |
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Sad and melancholy write, Fee; hope you are okay! You are in my prayers today! Very well done; bravo!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :( |
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| Reviewed by Morning Star |
7/9/2007 |
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This is a very unique write
Expressing sadness and the pain
Of dark clouds Just remember
Theirs always light at the
End of a dark tunnel
And you will find it!!
Many many Hugss going your way!!
Love Peace and Joy to you always...Yolie
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| Reviewed by Linda Hill |
7/9/2007 |
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((( Fee )))
There's light at the end of the tunnel, my friend. Powerful write and one of your best. Huggs!
Many blessings,
~Linda |
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| Reviewed by Anna M |
7/9/2007 |
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| One can get lost in darkness, but there are hidden treasures in those times too, which can help lead us to even greater light and understanding. Thanks for sharing this powerful piece. The picture of the rose is beautiful too. |
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| Reviewed by Southern Comfort |
7/9/2007 |
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Sweetpea! This write fairly broke my heart! I hate that Ya are feelin so down! I am keepin Ya close, in my heart and in my prayers!
HUGS! SC |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
7/9/2007 |
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| Out of the depths I cry to Thee Lord, Lord hear my prayer. |
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| Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot |
7/9/2007 |
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When the light shines, that rose will come to life, and become a lovely deep shade of purple, you'll see
Hugs
Cherry |
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| Reviewed by Rose Rideout |
7/9/2007 |
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| Dear Felix I haven't spoken to you yet today but I know where this is going and has gone, I am so sorry, I can feel your pain and loss through your words, I just wish I could make or change things, but the man up above is in control. Love ya Cuz XOXO, Rose |
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| Reviewed by Walt Hardester |
7/9/2007 |
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dang Felix......turn on a light
really...just an attempt at some humor...I do understand bud
Walt |
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| Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G |
7/9/2007 |
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Where is this going to>..............
Dark as the last stone closes the tomb, hey
and a beautiful stark love story following in by this week!
This is a vivid DARK! expressed darkly! Rose pict. is perfect for these dark lines too~
The energy you bring forth!
Many WArm and Tight Hugs to ya' Sweet FEE!
- Namaste -
Peace and WArmest Blessings! Love, Warrior "Spirit" Lady Sheeeoox
STay POsitive~!
STay SAFE! |
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| Reviewed by George Thompson |
7/9/2007 |
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Felix,
I agree that darkness can be solemn and morose; but there's always that uplifting feeling of seeing one again and being able to turn a negative into a positive aspiration.
George |
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| Reviewed by K. Mulroney |
7/9/2007 |
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| This is a very different write for you. A sadness is seen here, that hanging hearts are made of. With the verse " The last stone that closes off the tomb" leaves a sliver of hope because what rolls can move once again. Very dark yet so thought provoking. And I love that rose! |
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| Reviewed by Suzie Palmer |
7/9/2007 |
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Oh Fee!
Biggest hugs to You. And to your dear friend who you blessedly met with again... Love to All...Love's Eternal! Blessings to your love Fee... May you always feel his love...He's graduated! Promoted even...
Love and Unity
Suzie xoxoxoooxoxoxoxoxooxox .... .... .... ....
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| Reviewed by Alexandra* OneLight*® Authors & Creations |
7/9/2007 |
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This poem exudes despondency, my sweet friend, like a wave of indeed the darkest water gradually grabbing a hold of one's ankles, then surging up and further up, until the whole being seems to be engulfed in it. And yes, life does present us with dark moments such as this, once in a while... but allow me to offer you the wise words of someone who has been through all possible trials, and yet... a constant, heartfelt smile, illuminates his face: "Where unfortunate things happen in our lives there are two possible results. One possibility is mental unrest, anxiety, fear, doubt, frustration, and eventually, depression.(...) The other possibility is that because of that tragic experience you become more realistic, you become closer to reality. With the power of investigation, the tragic experience may make you stronger and increase your self-confidence and self-reliance. The unfortunate event can be a source of inner strength." - The Dalai Lama. May this Dark be, therefore, and no matter how impossible this may seem, a Source of Light, dearest Fee.
A warm {{{{{{{{{{{hug}}}}}}}}}}}} with much Love, from your (evasive in presence but sincere in essence) friend,
Alexandra* |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
7/9/2007 |
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A closed room without windows and without lights, painted wall ceiling and floor with black.
A blind man inside, fumbling around trying to grab a black cat that isn't there.
Depression do that to you.
Very dark poem.
Georg |
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| Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader) |
7/8/2007 |
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| Oh it's brighter on the other side. Just have trust. Victor |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
7/8/2007 |
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| when it is time, the stone will once again roll away from the tomb and i can hear you say "hello new friend" ... |
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| Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson |
7/8/2007 |
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Wow Felix...this is truely in the depth of night...however
"The last stone that closes off the tomb"
I recall that the stone was rolled away and so shall it be with you is my hope.
Allen |
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