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| Reviewed by Sheila Roy |
6/4/2008 |
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Fee,
I love the imagery here. The fog seems to enhance the lonely feel throughout most of your poem. An excellent twist of fate leaves a smile on the reader's face. Beautiful~
Sheila |
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
5/30/2008 |
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Fee, this poem is so mystical, and hauntingly sad and romantic all at the same time. Wonderful job...
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V" |
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| Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse |
5/30/2008 |
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Good Morning Fee,
Your Poem Expressed Love's Undieng Passion & Needs. Love is in many places even in a memory, but being held in the end is beautiful.
Embraced ~ Embrassé
Vickie |
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| Reviewed by blue soplain |
5/29/2008 |
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beauty.....so delicately woven; and that mystical pic. .. .
again, beauty.
nessa |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
5/29/2008 |
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We live on such a fine line,,,,This gives a reader much to think about,,, Excellent Poem!
Love, Christine |
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| Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks |
5/29/2008 |
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Your words show us that with faith and patience, the question "why" fades, to be replaced with a new knowledge of love. Beautifully written poem with deep images, Felix.
Blessings, Appreciation, and Love ~~ Micke |
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| Reviewed by Sandie Angel |
5/29/2008 |
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Love always appears unexpectedly. The feeling is overwhelming at times; but you know when opportunity knocks you won't ever want to miss it! Beautifully-expressed!!!!
Sandie May Angel :o) |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
5/29/2008 |
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| Never give up on love - a lesson for us all. |
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| Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) |
5/29/2008 |
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| Breath Taking sweet Fee,have a wonderful and safe day...oh by the way so you think I need a SPANKING huh(Giggles)..keep smiling OK...Hugsssssss |
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| Reviewed by Paul Berube |
5/29/2008 |
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Fee,
Beautiful poem and outstanding ending. The imagery was excellent. Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul. |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
5/29/2008 |
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Love lost, cliff, solitude and sucide...then through the mist the promise of love again...in one weren't so tempted to jump out...
Georg |
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| Reviewed by Flying Fox Ted L Glines |
5/28/2008 |
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So sad-sweet, Fee! Loss and promise rolled up in a loving package. Brilliant!
Ted |
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| Reviewed by Dawn Anderson |
5/28/2008 |
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| This is absolutely beautiful as is the photo! |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
5/28/2008 |
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| wow--such a beautiful write-- |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Price |
5/28/2008 |
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| OH so heartbreakiing and heartwarming. Just out of reach. Excellent tension. Liz |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
5/28/2008 |
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Such a beautiful photograph! A very heartwarming piece, so vivid and with such emotion that one could see the two strolling along the shore in a rekindling of love.....
Be always safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by Deborah Munson (Reader) |
5/28/2008 |
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| Wonderful poetical story of loss and new starts. You did a great job here today Fee. Very enjoyable read. Well Done! Deborah |
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| Reviewed by Morning Star |
5/28/2008 |
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Fee this one is very beautiful
Powerful write your words captured
A deep Sadness
Its hard to lose a love,
You also captured the but the emotions
Of a new love!
Powerful words of wisdom!!
Peace love and Hugessss....Morning star
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| Reviewed by Bernice Angoh |
5/28/2008 |
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| How beautifully you write of loss and pain and reconnecting again. I love this write so very much. Beautiful pen Fee! |
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| Reviewed by Barbara Terry |
5/28/2008 |
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A very powerful write, and from the soul. We love, lose, and love again. That is the pain of the soul. Thank you for sharing, Fee.
May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFULSISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie |
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| Reviewed by Suzie Palmer |
5/28/2008 |
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'The fog rolls out and the stars spotlight
The flagstone path towards the beach
Then on the path out of the fading mist
A woman smiles.....'
Oh Felix! Glorious visuals and precious message ...
It's great to know... 'life supplies sometimes the answers
To love’s recurring pain…'
Love to You Beautiful Man,
Suzie xox :-D
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
5/28/2008 |
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Powerful write, Fee; bravo!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :( |
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| Reviewed by Rose Rideout |
5/28/2008 |
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Wow Felix, I guess he got his answer. This is another great write as he finds a new love to keep his spirits up. Thank you for sharing Cuz.
Love ya face Cuz XOXOXO, Rose |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
5/28/2008 |
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Powerfully penned sadness, Fee, well done -
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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