|Reviewed by Sheila Roy
|I guess a day like this does sound good to most. A break from the hectic week. For me, NO KIDS and a great book is the way to appreciate a Saturday...lol. You've created a special feel in this poem, Fee. It feels like a fond memory - all warm and fuzzy. Love and Hugs,
|Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
|I like this poem! Reminds me of my childhood Saturdays.|
|Reviewed by M. Teresa Clayton
|You handsome devil you. This is a comment on several of your poems. All great!!! Love the pic of you and Willie. This one, however, is something I can savor.|
|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|i miss the business and innocence of those times as well--a lovely write|
|Reviewed by Gwendolyn Thomas Gath
I loved the wonderful memories offered in "Burnt Toast and Saturdays."
Nothing like burnt toast and those cartoons yes we can relate.
Thank you for sharing your poem and yes definately we should treasure each and every moment/day.
|Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot
|Such Sweet burning Nostalgia!
|Reviewed by Michelle Mead
|This is a heartwarmer for sure, well-written, too, no surprise as you have written it :) Michelle|
|Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G
|Beautifully said and felt Sweetie, and the Grand childrens' BEST days with Grandma and Grandpa!
Loving memories for ALL! Thank you for sharing them with us and the flow was so easy, as you wrote it! also I know this time, burnt toast smells up the HOUSE! Whewww!
Simple is the BEST!
SMILES WERE MADE, what else is needed! :)
Warmest Blessings of LOVE, PEACE and Bright Light, Warrior Purple Lady SHEExooo
|Reviewed by Selena Dobbin-Gillis
|Hey cuz, you just told the world on how I spend my weekend. You certainly expressed it well for the world to see. Love the write cuz.
|Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*®
Some of the simplest things can be the best life has to offer. We must learn to live in the moment.
Love & Light always and in all ways,
|Reviewed by stan nassano
|yes a walk down memory lane,nice write,
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|Yes indeed, I have to smile,,,as with 4 kids all one year apart,,it was just as you expressed...lol...gosh I miss those days!
|Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
|Oh, Fee, this is so wonderful and so touching. You have the talent of making everyday things come to life through your writing.|
|Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy
|Truer words were never spoken. I miss the sounds that go with motherhood to young children. I especially miss the laughter echoing though the house and drifting through the duct work. You brought it all back to me for a few seconds and I thank you.
|Reviewed by Jack Kuperman
|And all this memories just because of burnt toast smell?|
|Reviewed by neerja gandhi
|te hee hee hee...tee hee hee hee......wow...great hustle bustle....topsy turvy...tee hee hee ...|
|Reviewed by Morning Star
|I have burnt toast every morning lol
Your poem brought back fun memories when
My house was fill with the joy of children and
Pork pig cartoon on my TV!
I love this beautiful Joyful write!!
Sending you Peace Love and Hugsssss...Yolie
|Reviewed by Axilea MU
|Felix, you have a real talent for observing and describing those things that we no longer notice and that are the very stuff of our lives.
|Reviewed by Jon Willey
|your poem reminded me of my Saturdays and burnt toast Felix -- cartoons and all of the little chores that consumed the day -- and what fond memories they are -- peace and love -- JMW|
|Reviewed by Bernice Angoh
|What a beautiful and cheerful write I remember this line so well
"While Sylvester chases Tweet Bird"
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|Fond memories and tears that all is forever gone. Just not the same when only left with tiny moments in time to reflect upon. Beautiful, heartfelt write my friend...
Be always safe,
|Reviewed by Linda Law
|Oh what memories .... so special, and they become more priceless with time... good work Fee... thank you, lindalaw
By the way... your book is on its way! hope you enjoy it! lindalaw
|Reviewed by Denise Edwards
|amen, I agree. the simple things we take for granted become timeless and precious memories. Great job, Fee!|
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
|Yes Fee too soon the cherished things become only memories. Beautiful write.|
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|Excellent both for & of memories, though I never had kids, fortunately for them, and now that I know more about them, I guess I lost a little bit of life not having them...Keep bringing memories as great as this one & buy yourself a new toaster, send the bill to Georg & P-wee, both are quite well off...Ed|
|Reviewed by Rose Rideout
|How very precious and yes I remember those Mother's Day breakfast with Fred away and the children's little faces as they served me burnt toast, raw eggs and a mug with both tea & coffer in it along with flour to whiten it in bed. How could I refuse to eat this meal fit for the garbage..ah I mean fit for the Queen. lol. Another great smile within your words cuz. thank you for sharing.
Love ya face cuz XOXOXO, Rose
|Reviewed by J'nia Fowler
|Bravo. What a great reminder of what is important. Blessings, J'nia|
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|Ah, the memories the sense of smell can trigger - well done, Fee.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
|Reviewed by Georg Mateos
|Now, if you were to take me to KFC... my Saturday would have been deeeelicious!
Burn black toast? only a grandfather with experience will get that.
|Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)
|Hi Fee, This is a wonderful write!!!! It reminds me of how my ex always burned the toast. We didn't have a toaster, but we had a gas stove that he would light and hold the pieces of bread over the flame. He could never get it right!
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|I've always liked burnt toast and Saturdays, and your last two lines say it all.|
|Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
|Fee, Oh this poem brings back such sweet memories. Some days I wish things were as simple as they used to be. Lovely poetry, Fee.
Peace, love, and light,
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|Wonderful nostalgic write, but I'll leave the toast (burnt or otherwise) for Karla; I HATE toast! LOL Well done, Fee; bravo!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D