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(De)fenceless
by Felix LeRoy Perry
Sunday, January 23, 2011
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Another of my recent pictures from a early gray dawn outing with my camera...


 

 

(de)fenceless

 

no fences hold her

each dawn presents a new choice

cold wind drowns my voice

 

 

two paths through a world

choice between logic or love

sad tears of a dove

 

 

seeds of what could be

dormant till her ray of light

shakes off dark of night

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 



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Reviewed by K. Mulroney 6/1/2011
choice between logic or love - I say hell with logic, love is hard to come by in todays world, take it and go! Don't look back, you can;t change the past but can live for right now. Wonderful write Fee.
Reviewed by Denise Edwards 1/31/2011
Embracing the power of the sea. Great writing, as always!
Reviewed by Sheila Roy 1/28/2011
Diverse imagery, Fee. Nicely written:)
Sheila
Reviewed by Kathleen McDonald 1/26/2011
A really good work. Sometimes we have to be careful what choices we make .
hug
Kathy
Reviewed by Chessly Nesci 1/26/2011
Best choice is to listen to the gut. It never lies and always leads us in the right direction. I can so relate to this writing. It feels like my life. We have to lay dormant until ready to face our choices, then let everything out, or shake the dust off so the light can be seen. Beautiful, honest, heartfelt poetry my friend. :) May your light always be bright! ~Chessly
Reviewed by Carole Mathys 1/26/2011
Poignant thoughts on what could be seen as choices made...splendid writing, Fee.

Carole~
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart 1/25/2011
The picture is perfect illustration of a fine poem Fee.
Reviewed by Dayvid Graybill 1/24/2011
The "sad tears of a dove" is capturing line. The dove of love, the dove of peace, the dove of gracefulness, all sad to tears. Nice write Fee.

Peace,
Dayvid
Reviewed by Richard King 1/24/2011
Powerful words. Not sure where they are Leading me, but I'm feeling(Defenseless as they compel me to follow. PS: Your photographic skills would seem to rival your considerable skills with the pen.

Thanks for sharing both. Dick
Reviewed by Annabel Sheila 1/24/2011
Amazing Ku's, Fee....perfectly captures the essence of your picture....getting to be a real photography buff! This is very kool!

Hugs,
Anna
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 1/24/2011
Wonderful, but melancholic lines; well done, Fee!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Texas, Karen Lynn. :(
Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen 1/23/2011
Melancholy, to me, Felix, I can't help but see the other poem(s). It's like Escher. A puzzle. Until it stops.

cold wind drowns my voice
sad tears of a dove
shakes off dark of night

'shakes off dark of night' is the key to the whole piece. Lovely, spirit-and-mind.

Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen



Reviewed by Amber Moonstone 1/23/2011
There is a sensitivity in this poem that leads the reader into a world that is gray and dreamy, but also a bit sad.

Another epic Fee poem..

Much peace, love and light,
Amber
Reviewed by Regis Schilken 1/23/2011
Sounds like you can describe cold weather very well. It is supposed to be either 0 degrees or lower during the night. All is in a frigid chill. Our three rivers are frozen over.

rege
Reviewed by Walt Hardester 1/23/2011
Hope you wore your rubbers.
Looks cold and wet. Lovely reflections.

~W~
Reviewed by Christine Alwin 1/23/2011
Hmmmm, after reading this it really makes me long for spring and new growth..color and sunshine, it has been one cold winter! Nice work
Hugs,
Chrissie
Reviewed by Christine Tsen 1/23/2011
I love this one, leading the reader into serious and deep thoughts...
Blessings,
Christine
Reviewed by Mary Lacey, Desertrat 1/23/2011
Fee,

a very beautiful poem.

Mary
Reviewed by katie peterson (Reader) 1/23/2011
Romantic Poetess Victoria L. McColley expresses my thoughts to a tee.

It's beautiful,Felix! Thank you!!
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan 1/23/2011
mysterious-really neat write!
Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse 1/23/2011
this is raw emotion for me Fee
and I can totally feel the contemplation
the thinking...the thoughts...all those choices
and most of all the love & wanting

Through Love's Bounty
Vickie
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 1/23/2011
Powerfully sad.
Reviewed by The Poetess 1/23/2011
This one reminds me of a crossroad. I hope Love is chosen to Light up the dawn. Beautiful as your writings are.
Reviewed by Ed Matlack 1/23/2011
Sad, yes, but a necessary sadness all the same..e
Reviewed by Paul Berube 1/23/2011
Very nicely done, Fee.
Reviewed by Rose Rideout 1/23/2011
The pic is beautiful Cuz, nice little camera you have there. The write is sad yet excellent as usual.

Love ya face Cuz XOXOXO, Rose

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