Blue Planet (poem) by Anne Brooks on AuthorsDen

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Blue Planet by Anne Brooks Friday, July 08, 2005 Rated "G" by the Author. Share Print Save Become a Fan A poem of Hope.

Wish upon the stars tonight And your world will explode into a thousand flames: Traveling the Universe on a painted ship, The planets speed by,like cars on a highway. The music is drumming,like the blood In my veins-I am the captain,ready To give orders to land into biting reality. Blue oceans and angry volcanoes Open their enormous mouths Ready to swallow the ship- Dolphins swim by,whistling their joy and dancing with the waves-The ship is approaching earth, Resisting the laws of gravity Coming home safely from the voyage.

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Reviewed by George Carroll	8/6/2005

Perfect imagery that takes a reader on your journey.




Reviewed by Maria Cristina Azcona	7/25/2005

Onomatopeias and alliterations, ecologic theme and games of words: Perfect!




Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G	7/8/2005

Wow- This is GOOD! I love the way my mind could capture all you SAW, as you wrote this BEAutiful Poem! (Anne) Pict. is fitting too- Thanks! :) Many HuGs and Write ON- Lady,Sheee *Sheila




Reviewed by Robin Labenberg	7/8/2005

Great imagery and desciption...nicely penned