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| Reviewed by Robert Montesino |
4/18/2005 |
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| I enjoyed this Carole, an enjoyable fun read! And from the looks of that pic...your sure are one courageous lady, I've always wanted to run a river like that...who knows maybe someday! |
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| Reviewed by David Young |
3/17/2005 |
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| Beautiful poetic imagery, loved it all. |
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| Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader) |
3/14/2005 |
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Beautiful and an intense rush through this poem gives the true rush of riding the river. Beautiful and Perfect.
Out west here they do the Colorado River.Utah is the best part.
You had to have had fun. What an intese terrifying beautiful ride of a lifetime. Heart pumping and stopping.
Thank You Carole
Tracey |
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| Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen |
3/14/2005 |
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Great write
God Bless
Michelle! |
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| Reviewed by Phillip William Allen |
3/13/2005 |
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| Being one who loves fast water I truly enjoyed |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
3/13/2005 |
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| Truly enjoyed your poetic adventure tale, Carole - I've gone white water rafting a few times myself - and I truly enjoyed the ride - and now, you've given me the desire to do it again! |
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
3/12/2005 |
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You Dare Devil you
what adventure, I used to be so
daring in my younger yesterdreams
Well Penned adventure ride.
felt it all the way down
William ....Peace & Love |
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| Reviewed by Sandy Knauer |
3/12/2005 |
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| Oh my. You enjoy it for both of us, okay? Looks terrifying to me. Great job - both the bravery and the poetry. I enjoyed your trip THIS way ;-) |
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| Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain |
3/12/2005 |
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Carole,
The only ones I ever rode were in the bath ... exquisite, exhilarating write - exceptional!!
Best to you,
Robert |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
3/12/2005 |
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Wow! Carole,you are brave! An exciting poetic retelling of a thrilling event! I once did dome rapids in Colorado not the
wilder ones;-) It was exciting with a few breathtaking spins
and I did enjoy it,I love water. But nothing like what you did!
Great write!
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
3/12/2005 |
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Excellent ....wow!!
Wild waters of the west!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
3/12/2005 |
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| excellent poem ... sounds like you had an exciting time of it ... i once tried this and we ended up in the rapids ... amazing we are still alive ... never did such a thing again ;) |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
3/12/2005 |
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sounds thrilling; something i would NOT do! LOL i know my limits! LOL
great write and pic; thanks for sharing! well done, carole!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your tx. friend, karen lynn. :D |
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