|Reviewed by Amor Sabor
|You have written some memorable lines in this romantic piece...nothing gets my attention more than the power of love in verses. Bravo|
|Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic
|THIS is the kind of poetry that touches my heart, soul mind and spirit!
Soulmates merged forever as ONE!
I am definitely saving this one..thank you Carol..
|Reviewed by William Heffner
|Until you return to my arms
I will clothe myself in patience
How beautifully put, this is definitely an item missing from a lot of wardrobes.
God Bless You as you continue to share your talents
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|Beautifully Penned Carole
William .....Love & Peace
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|There is a passionate yearning expressed in these verses; and the ending is full of wisdom as well. Thank you for sharing this gift, Carole. Love and peace,
|Reviewed by E. Richardson
|mmmm....there is softness here...longing for sure...but your delicious word choice makes this nearly tropical in its erotic heat...Well done, my friend!|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|sometimes the waiting keeps it alive ...
|Reviewed by Phillip William Allen
|Sweet n smooth with all in place|
|Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
|Superbly expressed, Carole. Love the silky smooth feel to this moving write! Bravo!
Peace and Blessings,
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Exceptional poem of loves sweet pleasures awaited. Beautifully penned!|
|Reviewed by Lori Moore
|Beautiful. I love the way you end this.|
|Reviewed by Tami Ryan
|Ah, yes... it's the patience that's the hard part. Nice piece.|
|Reviewed by Michelle Close Mills
|How lovely...peaceful, easy, and delightful to read.|
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|Ah, yes, that old waiting game. It can be tough. Nice poem.|
|Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*®
|Gorgeous, romantic, spiritual.
Love & Light,
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
This has it all.