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Random Thoughts - (freestyle Haiku)
by Carole Mathys
Tuesday, August 04, 2009
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Random Thoughts

( freestyle Haiku )

 

 

 

words worry the air

as consciousness

nuzzled the ceiling

 

 

 

stories long untold

lives disappearing thru cracks

existing shadows

 

 

 

endless waves of dreamers

from rigid old worlds ways

themselves fleeing west

 

 

 

in the open window

whispering against the sill

lace curtains

 

 

 

elongated leaf shadows

drawing a candle closer

breathing darkness upon it

 

 

 

© Carole Mathys

8/4/2009

 

 

 

 




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Reviewed by Annabel Sheila 9/1/2009
Loved them all! Beautiful random thoughts...lovely expressions of them.

Anna
Reviewed by E T Waldron 8/14/2009
Carole, I truly believe that you are tops in the haiku genre! You never write anything less than the best!Kudo's!
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 8/8/2009
I love haiku and I certainly love and appreciate these, Carole. Thank you for sharing them. Love and best wishes,

Regis
Reviewed by Art Sun 8/8/2009
nice thoughts Carole...

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen 8/8/2009
oh, elusive light of life... dreamers, shadows, breath of darkness...
what an exquisite write, dear carole.
be well,
carolyn
Reviewed by D Johnson 8/5/2009
A story for each Ku... well done!

Cheers,
Dan
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge 8/5/2009
I am really enjoying your beautiful poetry. This poem conjured up such images and feelings.
Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle 8/5/2009
Beautiful haiku's,I enjoy reading them,take care

EDWIN
Reviewed by Georg Mateos 8/5/2009
"...breathing darkness..." two words that encompass an immense array of feelings.
Great job!

Georg

Reviewed by Felix Perry 8/4/2009
Great poetry withh such wonderful depth...
hugs
fee
Reviewed by John Flanagan 8/4/2009
Carole,
Not so random to this impressed reader, the linkage is in tone, style and ether; all of them first-rate but (almost inevitably) I have a favourite

in the open window
whispering against the sill
lace curtains

that is beautiful and so evocative. Kudos!

John
Reviewed by Jon Willey 8/4/2009
these free form Haikus are in depth works of art -- my favorite, though I have another that just narrowly missed, is, "endless waves of dreamers - from rigid old world ways - themselves fleeing west" --an applicable analysis over 150 years ago, and still applicable today -- peace and love my dear friend -- Jon Michael
Reviewed by Gene Williamson 8/4/2009
Love your randowm thoughts, Carole, especially...

in the open window
whispering against the sill
lace curtains

-gene.

Reviewed by Johanna Fields 8/4/2009
Carole,Your haiku's are beautiful. My friend hugs Johanna
Reviewed by Christine Alwin 8/4/2009
love these Carole..the last one is my favorite:)
Reviewed by George Carroll 8/4/2009
These are wonderful haiku's.
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 8/4/2009
Wonderful write, Carole; fantastic! BRAVA, extremely well penned!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Reviewed by Kate Burnside 8/4/2009
A fabulous haiku-chain, Carole, with a sublime common thread... I get the sense of evening and sunset, soft winds, elongating shadows and quiet meditation. Especially the first ku is sheer brillliance. Top notch work, TY Kate xx
Reviewed by Joyce Bell 8/4/2009
NICE WORK. THANKS FOR SHARING AND GOD BLESS YOU.
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
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