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Spring Storm
by Carole Mathys
Saturday, May 01, 2010
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Spring Storm

 

thunder rumbled and growled

flexing its mighty strength

angry lightning  stomped between clouds

  the house seemed to gather its breath

 its heartbeat pulsed, pretending to be empty

there was a slight stiffness to the way

she slipped through the air crossing the room

as a lively patina of emotions

squirmed across her thoughts, like static electricity

another clap of thunder rolled,

 windowpanes vibrating like drumheads

lights throbbing dimly like pulsing storm beams

coruscating curtains of radiant rain

silvered the night

torrents pounded and pried seeking entrance

as the storm painted luminous galaxies on the skylights

while faint images crawled the hallway floors

loneliness was present as if pure purpose

encased in impatience pierced and filled the void

with an oppressive sense of bleakness

standing by the window the street was visible

behind that sequined veil of rain

only in a succession of wedges between half closed blinds

her reflection

just bounced back

into the lonesome void

 

Carole Mathys

May 1, 2010

 

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Reviewed by Regis Schilken 1/12/2011
"while faint images crawled the hallway floors
loneliness was present as if pure purpose
encased in impatience pierced and filled the void
with an oppressive sense of bleakness"

I must admit that I hate gloomy days, but when a lightning storm is brewing, I go out and sit on my back porch and watch it unfold while my wife hides inside.

rege
Reviewed by Rafika Anderson (Reader) 12/31/2010
Lovely writing, Carole. I so enjoy the rain. Your depiction of this scene is moving.

-=ra=-
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 8/11/2010
Awesome write Carole!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Gene Williamson 7/18/2010
Carole, what a beautiful display of imagery, summed up perfectly
in the closing three lines. Also, I love these two lines:
while faint images crawled the hallway floors
loneliness was present as if pure purpose...
-gene
Reviewed by Barbara Terry 7/7/2010
I agree with La Belle. This is an image rich piece that many of us have experienced during a thunderstorm or two. Thank you for sharing.

May the Lord Bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and walk by your side. With love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your den sister Barbie
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart 7/1/2010
The images are truly incredible and the mood is palatable Carole. So perfectly penned.
Reviewed by William Bonilla 5/18/2010
An awesome write Carole
what an amazing picture you have chosen
to accompany your outstanding verses....Bravo
Love & Peace



William
Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen 5/6/2010
"... loneliness was present as if pure purpose encased in impatience pierced and filled the void..." brilliantly expressed, Carole. Another amazing write.
Be Well, Poetess!
Carolyn
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 5/2/2010
Your engaging description draw the reader (me) right into the experience, Carole. Thank you. Love and best wishes,

Regis
Reviewed by J'nia Fowler 5/2/2010
This poem is both excellently constructed and is imbued with both mystery and light. The picture is magnificent as well. J'nia
Reviewed by Liana Margiva 5/2/2010
EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Reviewed by Georg Mateos 5/2/2010
And if you happen to open your emotional umbrella you could be airborne like Mary Poppins! Great imagery!

Georg

Reviewed by Paul Judges 5/2/2010
Carole, splendid poem !
Reviewed by Mary Lacey, Desertrat 5/1/2010
Carole,

Beautiful metaphoric poem describing the spring storm which can be Mother Nature showing her fury. Loved it.

Mary
Reviewed by Emile Tubiana 5/1/2010
Dear Carole, first I am happy to see you again. Your description shines with wonderful colors. As I always say, I admire your style and your perfection. Be well, love Emile
Reviewed by jude forese 5/1/2010
potent and perceptive poem .... excellent ...
Reviewed by Jon Willey 5/1/2010
this is classic Carole Mathys -- impressive imagery, emotion grabbing hand over hand with the next powerful thought -- I admire your talents my dear friend -- a beautiful poem -- may peace and love be always with you -- Jon Michael
Reviewed by John Flanagan 5/1/2010
Strong, arresting word choices and excellent use of image in this fine piece of work, Carole; "...the house seemed to gather its breath..." and "...loneliness was present as if pure purpose encased in impatience pierced and fllled the void..." are just two of the many examples of wonderful writing here.

John
Reviewed by Felix Perry 5/1/2010
You filled the screen with the electricity and fear that permeated that room to put us in there with her...well done Carole.
fee
Reviewed by Annabel Sheila 5/1/2010
Awesome write, Carole!!! Amazing...the way you put this one together!

Anna
Reviewed by TONY NERONE 5/1/2010
I agree with the previous reviewer your writing is well worth waiting for. It is always well crafted and interesting.


GOD BLESS YOU
Tony
Reviewed by Mark Lichterman 5/1/2010
Carole, you do not write a lot, but when you do what you write is so worth the wait. Beautiful! I can feel the storm's throbbing along with the electricity charged static. Great, thoroughly, verbally painted.
Mark



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