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Haunted Hotel
by Carole Mathys
Thursday, October 28, 2010
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Haunted Hotel

 

are you dying to

get away from it all

looking for a quiet place

to rest your bones

be very careful

 where you book a room

sometimes there are ghoulish reason

for the vacancy

as the unseen occupants

await more unsuspecting guests

so answer this question

as the ghostly shadows close in

what do you fear most

what is it that quickens the heart

causing knees to tremble

and sweat to pour

come and join me

if you dare

check into the 13th floor

and find out

reservations are necessary

terror is complimentary   

 

October 28, 2010

Carole Mathys

 

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Reviewed by Regis Schilken 1/9/2011
Likewise, I enjoyed "Haunted Hotel."

For whatever reason, I'll make sure NOT to check in on the 13th floor.
Reviewed by George Carroll 10/30/2010
Don't plan on traveling near that hotel. Right poem for the season but for ghosts it's any season to spoke you.
Reviewed by John Flanagan 10/29/2010
Perfect for the season, Carole...tongue-in-cheek take and with that hint at truth that rattles us just a little bit more than we like...or can take.

John
Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen 10/28/2010
Boo!
Have a playful Halloween!
Cheers,
Carolyn
Reviewed by Christine Tsen 10/28/2010
A whimsical joy to read, so clever and unexpected!
A Halloweeny gem.
Best Wishes,
Christine
Reviewed by Annabel Sheila 10/28/2010
Excellent Halloween write, Carole!!!! Reminds me of a scary movie I once saw about the non-existent 13th floor.....boooooo!

Anna
Reviewed by TONY NERONE 10/28/2010
Very nicely done, creepy stuff.


GOD BLESS YOU
TONY
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 10/28/2010
Great creepy piece, Carole; well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, and BOO! to you too!

As always, your friend in Texas, Karen Lynn. :D *BOO!!*
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 10/28/2010
OH my, Carole -- effectively creepy! Well done!

(((HUGS))) love and Happy Boo! Day to you,

Karla. =]
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) 10/28/2010
'Bout time you came out of hiding, Carole. Love this one. Just the right amount of spookiness for the dawning of All Hallows Eve . . .
Reviewed by Jon Willey 10/28/2010
Halloween! Some of those apparitions are friendly and harmless. Others want to frighten and are pushy and belligerent. The 13th floor must be the ideal place to begin a ghostly stay. Haunted buildings are neat and offer diversity not found at just any old place. As long as it is not the "Bates" motel I am fine. I am game either way. Thanks for the Halloween booster shot Carole. Love and peace to you my very dear friend. Jon Michael
Reviewed by Mark Lichterman 10/28/2010
Geeze, Carole, could it be bed bugs on the thirteenth floor? Very spoooooky poem, kiddo.
Your friend, Mark
Reviewed by Felix Perry 10/28/2010
Sounds like a frightfully delightful place....lol
fee
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 10/28/2010
A most apt and timely offering considering Halloween is only a few days away. Thank you, Carole. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis
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