|Reviewed by Art Sun
|Doesn't get any better than this Carole...you always have that soft whispering emotion of love, romance, and that mystical feeling of Nature...a blending of thoughts that captures this reader within reflection...
Happy New Year!!!
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
|Oh how gorgeous is this! Mystical, enchanting romantic.|
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|the shadows shifted in a wind dance
across the wooden deck
as if seeking the fire’s warmth
tossing our silhouettes behind us
draped upon the wall
in harmony they raise
spectral wine glasses
the wall catching the crimson glow
... such a vivid capture that speaks a mystery all its own, Carole! Magical and yet so real. Wonderful spark and sparkle of life in this write. Excellent! xx
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Oh I just love this piece...enjoyed!!
|Reviewed by Amor Sabor
|The images in this piece were profound and lifelike.|
|Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
|Wow! Beautiful poety!!!
|Reviewed by Liana Margiva
|VERY BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva|
|Reviewed by Emile Tubiana
|Dear Carole, this is a beautiful poem. A French romance and especially when you write: "I pursued your promise of more" Love emile
|Reviewed by D. Vaineo
|Carole, Very romantic
|Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
I love the sensuality all over this one. Your last line, the frosting on the cake..
Peace, love and light,
|Reviewed by jude forese
|certainly satisfies my thirst for a sensually stimulating poem ...|
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|Stunning Carole..viusals dance in my head~|
|Reviewed by Jon Willey
|Carole, the killer lines in this romantic interlude are many and formidable my dear friend. But it is the tender ambiance and the gifted stitching of mood and emotion that I find alluring. You reach out across the distance and embrace the reader's romantic impulses. Another rendering with silky smoothness and soul captivating experience. Love and peace to you. Jon Michael|
|Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
|atmospheric nirvana, carole.
very well done.
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|Sensual and sexy!
|Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
|elegance, autumn perceptions morph to witchcraft medicine, in vino veritas. excellent verse!!!|
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|Colorfully romantic with such deep emotions intertwined...
Be always safe,
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|There are truly some very lovely lines throughout this romantic offering of poetry, Carole. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and best wishes to you,
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
|Fine writing, Carole, no doubt at all; I'm particularly taken with, "...the moon was its narrowest, a pale silver sliver, a smear on the night..." and again with, "...the shadows shifted in a wind dance..."
and the ending is perfection.
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|Painted in the words of a true poet.|
|Reviewed by TONY NERONE
|Lovely piece, Carole.
|Reviewed by Mark Lichterman
|Very lovely poem that transcends age as I, at my age, feel myself... and would happily will myself into being drawn into the "rhythm of the night" with the woman that lives within my heart.
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|Last line worked for me. The gist of the whole poem. Beautiful articulated through this well-written poem to get to that last line. Stand. Clap.Clap. Take a bow.|
|Reviewed by Gerard Gauthier
|Every now and then I'll read a line that will set me back
"as a cool breeze swallowed the hint of warmth"
This is one of those lines..
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|A truly beautiful romantic poem with the warmth of the fire, the wine and the inner glow of desire...