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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
10/13/2012 |
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I love the ambiance of intrigue and mystery in this, and your character is enticing as well. Thank you for sharing, Carole. Love and best wishes,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
9/20/2012 |
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Love this you both
Enjoyed the "Sam spade touch"
Love &peace
William |
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
4/4/2012 |
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| oooo... what next?! This surely is just a taster... otherwise you're BOTH in trouble!! :)) As seamless as her well-turned stocking, you two! :)) Can't wait to see what lies beyond that fringe... xx |
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| Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen |
4/3/2012 |
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oh what fun! well done, carole & jon!
blessings,
carolyn |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
4/2/2012 |
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Excellent seamless,collab...I'm looking forward to the book! Wishing you both much success and happiness!
ET |
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| Reviewed by Amor Sabor |
4/2/2012 |
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| Very nicely done...excellent collaboration on such a great theme |
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| Reviewed by D. Vaineo |
4/2/2012 |
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Carole, This is like a film of the forties, a beautiful dame and a
detective who doesn't know any better...Love it!
Always,
Deborah |
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| Reviewed by Annabel Sheila |
4/2/2012 |
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Awesome!!!! Unfolds like a 40's movie! Loved the phrasing! Each verse wraps itself around the next....well done you two!
Anna |
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| Reviewed by Christine Tsen |
4/1/2012 |
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I love the perspective in this, so much fun!
Glorious collaborating, you guys!
Will there be more to come? I hope so, and the book...
Blessings,
Christine |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
4/1/2012 |
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I felt like I was listening to an old radio narrative of a flat foot dick about to get an interesting case.
Jon Michael, she does wonders.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
4/1/2012 |
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Excellent collab, Carole and Jon Michael!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Texas, Karen Lynn. :D |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
3/31/2012 |
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"...that husky polish
rubbed there by money"
ah, yes! and everything else
that goes with it - the disaster package
but such an enchanting alluring seductive
package
Congratulations to you both, Carole and Jon,
for this so well-written work
john |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton |
3/31/2012 |
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| Ah, I wrote a forties-gumshoe novel a couple of years ago just to get it out of my system. I called it Ram Slade (Sam Spade?). Hah! Turned out to be a pretty darn good book. This delightful collaboration put me in mind of it. Great poem! |
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| Reviewed by Mark Lichterman |
3/31/2012 |
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If that's not background, or forefront for "Bogy". Your words bring the image immediately forward. What would this fashionably slinky broad want with a "Shamus", huh? The black bird possibly.
Good to hear from you again, Carole.
Mark |
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