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|Reviewed by Vesna Vanessa
|Are they trying to light a fire
To burn like yesterday’s desire?
|Reviewed by Biri Amante (Reader)
|Sometimes, those "new wings" glisten in the sun as no
water droplet can.
Thank you for this lovely poem.
|Reviewed by Sandra Mushi
|Beautiful, poignant write!!!
God bless, James!
|Reviewed by Silvia Hartmann
|Nicely written poem and interesting thoughts of exploration :-)
Speaking as an older woman here:
They come to us,
drawn as they are by power,
sight and wisdom;
trembling do they fall to us
and trust that we will love them
gently, and release their passion
that is crying
for our sleeping beauty kiss.
|Reviewed by m j hollingshead
|Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
|I am surprised that no one commented on this beautiful,
thought-provoking poem. Those last two lines are powerful, indeed,
but I enjoyed all of it, James.