|Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)
|Well I love it!! The candle of hope I like that and the last line... perfection!!! ***** 5 stars for the whole kit n kaboodle that your mind the music and your pen poured out!! I truly loved from word one to the last one. (c :)
Thanks so much Paul xoox
|Reviewed by Aberjhani
|An extraordinary journey through the life of a powerful creative moment brutalized by the less sensitive among us. These are finely nuanced lines that capture the very essence and delicate passion of the creative impulse. Beauty greets the beast with a forgiving heart and a gentle sense of humor:-)
|Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
|Paul, you must be a riot in real life if you can come off this funny and natural on a page.|
|Reviewed by L. Figgins
|You disguise those achingly beautiful lines of longing in between verses about Motorhead. The juxtaposition makes them even more poignant. I laughed nevertheless. I'm glad that we can laugh through the pain...xox|
|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
|Hee, hee, glad I'm not the only nose picker..
Music is ok, but it can get me off track..
Love the humor....
|Reviewed by Nordette Adams
|I grinned from beginning and almost to end, then I chuckled. I loved it, Paul. ~~Nordette|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Thank you for sharing your humorous side. It is therapeutic for many, Paul. Love and peace. Regis|
|Reviewed by Sue Hess
|i loved this...absolutely loved it...i was getting a bit tired of romantic and this just grabbed me and said 'how about this'|
|Reviewed by Sherry Heim
|LOL, Paul...I hate it when my inspiration leaves before the poem is finished. I call it "clarity that fades to indifference." You have written the moment well.
|Reviewed by Dave Harm
|LOL... Where are you? You can't hide from the finger...|
|Reviewed by A PAX
Well both actions get results Paul, nose picking and prose writing. Except I think that the later produces a more permenent result, even if the first is a needed temporary fix. But either way something inside.....comes out....and when we got the blues.....
they need an outlet...
Enjoyed this tons!
LOL thank you for the unexpected smile, I am delighted.......pax Anita
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
LOL--poetus interruptus! LOVE IT
Clever, creative you--fantastic write!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)
|Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain
Poetic excellence is clearly defined in this outstanding write ... superb!!
|Reviewed by jude forese
|next time try listening to Eastern Awakening's "Buddha Chillout" may give you some food for thought besides those boggers ;)
cool humor at its best ...
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|Be sure to use your pinky finger, it gets further in to the thicker boogers...they have more taste and more meat...Ed|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|LOL!!!I always write with music, but I turn it off if it doesn't suit the mood of the poem;-) This is a fantastic write so be thankful to Motorhead, and please no picking your nose;-)!Love the humor!
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|Nah... I just laughed myself soxless at this, Paul... this has got to be Brithumour!! Ah yes!! The poetic sublime torpedoed by some heavy metal, or, in my case, belting Matchbox 20 (bit more intelligent and refined, but STILL belting at times!! - don't hit me!!) Bet you play pretty mean air-guitar, huh?! Yeah, let's forget all this poetry lark and just meet up for a bit of thrash... :)) LOL Kate aka Kuatro (Susie)(showing me age...) LOL Kate xx|
|Reviewed by Melissa Rives
|Lol...I found I MUST have silence to write...otherwise who knows what would come out...although some may think it's better than my usual anyway...lol|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Hey you may pick your nose...but...hmmmm....maybe meditation will give that head a good "backup" start!!
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Wow this is defiantely not your every day hum drum write. Well done.
|Reviewed by Henry Stevens
|Prose/nose.....as long as you keep writing and trying....smile. Henry|
|Reviewed by ~ Chanti
Even when motorhead interrupts your thoughts, you produce art. This is abstract but it is powerful nevertheless. The words 'like a candle, I watch you melt away' went deep. I find them achingly sad. In my heart I'd like to believe that nobody you love ever truly fades away but remains within, an everlasting light.
I wish I could contribute something more meaningful but for once I am at a loss for words...