|Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU
"It's Strange" flows on the river of loneness making waves of sadness all the way to the lake of tolerance.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
|Reviewed by J M
|Issues of the heart are always muse to beautiful and complex writes. This is wonderful and so wonderful at this point you were swept off your feet :).|
|Reviewed by Karen Cino
|It's strange what you can write
When you’re on your own
in the middle of the night.
I've written some deep things in the middle of the night so I too can definitely relate to this. Excellent write.
|Reviewed by Shoma Mittra
|great write. we call relate to it. i hv written some similar stuff too :-) shoma
|Reviewed by Nordette Adams
|The best thing about this, Paul, is that we can probably all relate to it, and yet that's the terrible thing too; we can all relate to unrequited love. You're a wonderful writer. ~~Nordette|
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|Best time to write...and you did good.
|Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
|Strange and w o n d e r f u l is "what y o u can
write." "See above for proof." Thanks!! Pea <3
|Reviewed by L. Figgins
|I have absolutely no idea what you're talking about, Paul. Life is a dream-a vision of my imagination that is. You write with such honest emotion, unveiled and shared with us so openly. I'm green. In more ways than one...Love, Lin|
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|Is it me, or does this strike such a chord with us all that it is, in fact, hilariously funny?? Probably I'm completely up the shoot and hysterical, Paul, but I just detect a cameraderie and a frisson of self-knocking humour here... uh-oh... hope it's not quite the opposite - that you're desperately self-possessed and serious instead. Otherwise it's me that's dealin another shitty blow. My antennae are completely busted atdemo, so please ignore me if I'm gettin this all wrong. But, what is very, very right about this write is that it absolutely ROCKS and is so upfront and honest I just wish I wrote it... cept it might not sound like me, but is how I might feel if I were you... on second thoughts, looks like I am totally screwed and just need to toddle off to bed. But I really like this, Paul, and I like you for writing it and... oh dear... what am I gonna be like under anaesthetic if I'm like this on Ovaltine?! You're not on the lookout for a humorist by any chance, are you?! LOL :)) Kate xx|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Honest and from the heart. I can completely relate, Paul. Thank you. Love and peace to you.
|Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)
|Very nicely said Paul. Truly related to.
Thanks for this great poem of truth!
Tracey 42xoox(c :)
Get some rest remember you are not a robot or the energizer bunny.
All work and no play is no good!
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Understand this one cause I have been there myself more then once I am afraid to admit but often some of our best works come int the still of the night.
|Reviewed by Carole Mathys
|Love the last three lines
It's strange what you can write
when you're on your own
in the middle of the night
It's the time of the night when you have to face yourself...
Wonderful write Paul...
|Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero
|Yeah... funny what triggers the muse. This poem reads like my life only better written! What shows through this, is the poet's strength of character to be able to turn a bad experience into good reading and definitely on a subject most can relate to. Thumbs up!
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Awwwwww...as Andy said you did win the Ashes....do I need to say more Chuckie?
One thing I know ....work does take it's toll... and broken relationships even more so my dearest friend!!
Keep your HEAD high and KNOW that you are loved...and smile I need to see a happy face today....okay?
Damn this made me sooooooooo sad to read!!
|Reviewed by Aberjhani
|IT'S STRANGE and yet it's wonderful how such tortured emotional ambivalence can give birth to such beautiful romantic lines.|
|Reviewed by Handsum Hart
|Writing is strange sometimes, just like life.
Good to see you posting.
|Reviewed by Tami Ryan
|Yep, amazing how the muses work, eh? Spot on.
Pick yerself up and dust yerself off. But keep writing! :)
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|Well we one the Ashes. On to the World cup football finals. The things that really matter in life.
A tough old world. But us brits can take it.
|Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
|ah, self-indulgent crap... my specialty so it has a place near and dear to my heart, Paul. :) nice to read you again. sincere wishes for much happiness and peace, Dawn|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Paul, well said, I hope you're not feeling that now, but if you are, methinks you have lots of company;-) I sometimes wonder how the hell it all goes wrong when it seems so right at first.Besides the world doing somersaults it seems we are doing them right along with it.Guess this is topsy turvy time;-)Hope you'll soon have your balance back. Keep writing, and don't be hard on yourself life is tough enough...