|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|This is fine poetry, Paul; gloomy yes perhaps, but I can relate to it. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and peace to you,
|Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU
Striking composition... "MAD".
Keep posting. Let the world know Your work, Poet.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
|Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga
Powerful, very emotive. Mr Gloomy indeed :P lol
Exceptional work as always
Much love and warm hugs sweet friend.
|Reviewed by J M
|Paul this is excellent deep but direct so simple as the worlds views are. Ty for this MAD|
|Reviewed by Aberjhani
|A very strong portrait of the kind of officially sanctioned madness that too often passes for civil authority in the modern world. Clean, brilliant, and provocative lines.|
|Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
|Great visual, masterful prose, Paul!
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|You ARE turning into Robbie Williams, Jekyll and Hyde... all with the silver tongue and the suave DJs... well, you know me... I'll be singing "My Way" ALL the way!! I liked very much the peculiarity of weaving the delicacy of shoeing fairies into this kettle-drum cauldron of a write, Paul and the visual conjures the mood magnificently. Very much a Midsummer Night's... Nightmare!! Electric, thank you! Kate xx|
|Reviewed by Richard Christopher Suarez
|paul,..you are a brilliant artist with aweosme takent
and this is Exceptionally well done!
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|Match..England V the AUSSIES..Huh we set them alight..
Funny old boy this is kinda dark in a light kinda way...
|Reviewed by M.Bennett Hooper (Mikii)
|All I can say is BRAVO. " to be born again, in light, a deterrent undercut. Magnificient write. Mikii|
|Reviewed by Candy T (Reader)
|i'm with robin - and i rather like the idea of a brief, happy death :)|
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|I agree with Eileen, Paul - this is your forte! Quite a graphic, too.|
|Reviewed by Robin Ouzman Hislop
|i like the eliptisms & sharp alternating shifts & economic use of vocabulary making chosen forms stand out saludos|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|meticulously crafted images invoking an atmosphere of remarkable moments ...|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Captivating, and I really look forward to more, I love this stuff and you do it so well! Kudo's!
|Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher
|Great work, indeed!
Birgit and Roger
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|It's a MAD <MAD>MAD>World we live in!!
The picture complements the poem very well Chuckie!!
|Reviewed by Peter Paton
|An absolutely enthralling and original piece Paul
Very cleverly executed in that you feel you are reading five poems or aligned haikus rolled up into one
I love that dynamic line " Fail- Safe is the watchword !
Incredible picture blurs your vision !
You should post more my friend, and develope your cutting edge, and treat us to more of your earthy writes !
|Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
|OH Paul! This is the money line--->"An anvil for shoeing fairies"
This is just so visual, throwing sparks! Lilliputian feet and striking flint to shoe them. Dr Strangelove indeed! I have a horseshoe I painted gold. It is said that a horseshoe should always be turned down, with the spikes pointing outward so one's luck won't fall. I have mine hanging just this way over my bedroom door. Works! The faeries/fairys visit me in my dreams. I really like this! The pic works its MAD to promote the poem. Excellent apocalyptic depiction.
|Reviewed by Kay P Devenish
|Very interesting,original and delightful to read.|