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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
9/18/2006 |
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This is fine poetry, Paul; gloomy yes perhaps, but I can relate to it. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and peace to you,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU |
4/17/2006 |
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Striking composition... "MAD".
Keep posting. Let the world know Your work, Poet.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU |
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| Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga |
2/2/2006 |
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Dearest Paul,
Powerful, very emotive. Mr Gloomy indeed :P lol
Exceptional work as always
Much love and warm hugs sweet friend.
Elga |
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| Reviewed by J M |
1/31/2006 |
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| Paul this is excellent deep but direct so simple as the worlds views are. Ty for this MAD |
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| Reviewed by Aberjhani |
1/28/2006 |
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| A very strong portrait of the kind of officially sanctioned madness that too often passes for civil authority in the modern world. Clean, brilliant, and provocative lines. |
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| Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen |
1/24/2006 |
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Great visual, masterful prose, Paul!
Peace,
Carolyn |
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
1/23/2006 |
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| You ARE turning into Robbie Williams, Jekyll and Hyde... all with the silver tongue and the suave DJs... well, you know me... I'll be singing "My Way" ALL the way!! I liked very much the peculiarity of weaving the delicacy of shoeing fairies into this kettle-drum cauldron of a write, Paul and the visual conjures the mood magnificently. Very much a Midsummer Night's... Nightmare!! Electric, thank you! Kate xx |
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| Reviewed by Richard Christopher Suarez |
1/23/2006 |
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paul,..you are a brilliant artist with aweosme takent
and this is Exceptionally well done!
peace',
Rich Criso |
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) |
1/22/2006 |
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Match..England V the AUSSIES..Huh we set them alight..
Funny old boy this is kinda dark in a light kinda way... |
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| Reviewed by M.Bennett Hooper (Mikii) |
1/22/2006 |
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| All I can say is BRAVO. " to be born again, in light, a deterrent undercut. Magnificient write. Mikii |
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| Reviewed by Candy T (Reader) |
1/22/2006 |
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| i'm with robin - and i rather like the idea of a brief, happy death :) |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
1/22/2006 |
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| I agree with Eileen, Paul - this is your forte! Quite a graphic, too. |
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| Reviewed by Robin Ouzman Hislop |
1/22/2006 |
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| i like the eliptisms & sharp alternating shifts & economic use of vocabulary making chosen forms stand out saludos |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
1/21/2006 |
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| meticulously crafted images invoking an atmosphere of remarkable moments ... |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
1/21/2006 |
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Captivating, and I really look forward to more, I love this stuff and you do it so well! Kudo's!
Eileen |
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| Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher |
1/21/2006 |
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Great work, indeed!
Birgit and Roger |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
1/21/2006 |
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It's a MAD <MAD>MAD>World we live in!!
The picture complements the poem very well Chuckie!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Peter Paton |
1/21/2006 |
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An absolutely enthralling and original piece Paul
Very cleverly executed in that you feel you are reading five poems or aligned haikus rolled up into one
I love that dynamic line " Fail- Safe is the watchword !
Incredible picture blurs your vision !
You should post more my friend, and develope your cutting edge, and treat us to more of your earthy writes !
Peter |
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| Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater |
1/21/2006 |
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OH Paul! This is the money line--->"An anvil for shoeing fairies"
This is just so visual, throwing sparks! Lilliputian feet and striking flint to shoe them. Dr Strangelove indeed! I have a horseshoe I painted gold. It is said that a horseshoe should always be turned down, with the spikes pointing outward so one's luck won't fall. I have mine hanging just this way over my bedroom door. Works! The faeries/fairys visit me in my dreams. I really like this! The pic works its MAD to promote the poem. Excellent apocalyptic depiction.
Sage
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| Reviewed by Kay P Devenish |
1/21/2006 |
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| Very interesting,original and delightful to read. |
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