|Reviewed by Candy T (Reader)
|couldn't have said it better myself, sir.|
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Reviewed by Gwendolyn Thomas Gath
"Coming of Age"
"Lies, upon lies, upon lie
like gathering clouds
in ever darkening skies"
Quite an interesting write!
I also agree with the motto on your bio.
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
|BRILLIANT wrtie, Paul!!!!! Well-done!!!!!
Sandie Angel :o)
|Reviewed by Nordette Adams
|Whata a battle cry! Very well written, Paul, as usual. ~~Nordette|
|Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
|R i g h t ON !! < < 'Pea' <3|
|Reviewed by Vesna Vanessa
|“Screw you” said I, “your game is up,
for we are infinities of possibilities,
free thinkers, who give our love freely,
we are all and we are one
and will not succumb”.
|Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci
Powerful! You jump off the page with a wake-up call in this write!
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|I particularly admire the power of the last stanza, Paul. Very well stated, my friend. Love and peace to you,
|Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
|The GPS Sparky radar could see it a comin'! Coming of Age wades into Truth up to its fattened flanks! How many pigs were put into the tomb to feed the emperor? Precise word organization, Paul...
|Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
|Oh, BRAVO Paul! A breath of fresh mountain air! Really clears away the fetid stench from the accumulated mounds of rotting human waste befouling our breathing (and hence, thinking) space.
Thank you for having the courage to post this resonate, timely piece, POET!
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Masterfully done Chuckie....and yes like Kate said....I can hear you and see you recite this!!
Powerful my friend!!
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|I always new I was tuned out.
Powerful, and a subtle intelligent rant type thingy...
|Reviewed by Aberjhani
|No loss of innocence quite so brutal as unforgiving disillusionment and no claim to selfhood quite so powerful as raging against the same. A beautifully brilliant and brilliantly beautiful work. Much gratitude for the sharing:-)
|Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia
|An excellent in-your-face refusal to bow to the powers that be, Paul!
'we are infinities of possibilities...' love it!
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Deep views on the intricacies of modern cyber space and laws that govern, I like this, we shall overcome.
|Reviewed by richard cederberg
|A man after my own heart Paul - well at times, when I am not gushing romantic drivel and convoluted mind puzzles.
A wise and insightful sage of a write with the overtones of a frustrated prophet.
"What foppery is this?" INDEED! Good job!
In fraternity ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Bravo! I love this fantssy in reality poem Paul! each line is powerful! "Truth is broadcasting on another frequency" This line is exactly what's happening today! Exceptional!
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|WOW!! I can both see and hear you recite this, Paul, (my privilege!!) and it is POWERFUL. For all your jovial flipness, you do "serious" and "deep" very well. This is a mind of a truly great thinker at work and your sonorous tones here spell out the message... "L-I-S-T-E-N.... I MEAN WHAT I SAY"... I like a good eye-ballin from time to time... this one stopped me in me tracks... On the other hand... you up for a party??????? :)) Too damn right you are... Poole Harbour or bust... BTW "What foppery is this?" Truth is broadcasting on another frequency.... BRILLIANT!! I like! LOL K xx|