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| Reviewed by Fergus Hancock |
5/27/2007 |
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Paul - this poem SHOULD cause a stink. You are the arch-heretic, the arch-noncomformist, to so lightly dispose of the world's idol. Be true to the prophet's garb - we need more to break ranks with the lemmings.
"It will take more to dispose of my tachings than my body." Justin Martyr. 'A man may be destroyed but never defeated.' Ernest Hemmingway.
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| Reviewed by Ian Thorpe |
9/26/2006 |
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| Yeah, omnia vincit amor maybe, in the information age we have easily forgotten that some things are worth more than money. |
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| Reviewed by E. Lucas-Taylor |
9/25/2006 |
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I take all unwanted donations.
Green is my fav...
(smiles)
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| Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen |
9/22/2006 |
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Upon change we can ever rely; but 'tis for progress we pray...
Excellent write, Paul.
Peace,
Carolyn |
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| Reviewed by Nordette Adams |
9/8/2006 |
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| Thank you for telling me what Norvus Ordo Seclorum means right off the bat. I didn't have the energy to search my brain. :-) Powerful last stanza, Paul. |
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| Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green |
9/7/2006 |
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ON THE MONEY!! Whoa. Maybe I should put it another way ;D.
You have done a great job of turning the M-word into a metaphor for
what ails us. When Jesus Christ kicked the money-lenders off the
steps {"vipers" was very strong language in that time and place}, I don't believe he did it because they had refused his application for a loan! [Er, I think.] It is so ironic when Get-Rich gurus teach that prayer and "faith" guarantee $ucce$$. . .and that kind of "success" is a sign a person is superior. . .even (or even especially) morally!! Weird & scary world we live in, isn't it? So hard not to want the wrong things!! Thanks for this stimulating and conscience jogging write. Always, 'Pea' <3 |
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| Reviewed by * Aberjhani |
9/7/2006 |
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Taking these lines on their own, their value as sociohistorical commentary and prophetic vision is quite profound. If it's very unlikely that we shall live to see a time when money is not the ruler of our fates on earth, at least we can look forward to the time when TALES FROM THE APOCALYPSE is in our hands and we can read the entire great work in and out of context at will:-)
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
9/7/2006 |
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| Just stunning and sooooooooo on point... an eye of the needle write, Darlin... or poking the eye WITH the needle!! :)) Mammon is a symbol, perhaps, of success, which is our latterday idolatry - however it presents itself, monetary or in other ways. Some fantastic and eyeballing lines here: "you were worthless then your pointless now" - HOW WISE IS THIS??!! Ahead of your time, that's what you are.... Keep penning it!! LOL K xx |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
9/7/2006 |
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Nope not offended!!
Outstanding work Chuckie!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
9/6/2006 |
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I don't see how anyone with any degree of intelligence could be offended by this, Paul. It is clear that "money" (the financial establishment) is destroying our planet. Thank you. Love and peace,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
9/6/2006 |
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| Excellent thought provoker Paul! For those who were offended the truth hurts,as for the masses they remain uninformed even in this high tech society.Because of complacency and too much comfort the thirst for knowledge sleeps. prophetic write;-) |
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| Reviewed by richard cederberg |
9/6/2006 |
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"A fronte praecipitium a turgo lupi"
A precipice in front, wolves behind.
(Between a rock and a hard place)
Those that don't have money often contemplate and rationlize its evils, those with money either use it as a tool to realize dreams and better the lives of others, or as a means to "rise above" those without.
Unity unwavering ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg |
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| Reviewed by Miss Pandora |
9/6/2006 |
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| Hmmm just makes you wonder how enlightened were the Illuminati?...think they should probably have stuck to alchemy and martyrdom perhaps? Money CAN be the root of all evil, IF you let your desire for it control you...really thought provoking piece that I enjoyed , Panda :) |
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| Reviewed by Peter Paton |
9/6/2006 |
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Paul
The love of money is the root of all evil, and your exemplary poem symbolises the absurdity of craving after an illusion and mirage of so called security..
Peter |
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| Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU |
9/6/2006 |
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The Dollar is the SEAL of WCO and the FLAG of ICC, and it is
The "Novus Ordo Seclorum" until the PRIESTS of MAMMON change it.
I have enjoyed the reading of "Novus Ordo Seclorum".
I salute You, Poet.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU |
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) |
9/6/2006 |
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| The govt does seem to be on a fast track to distruction. |
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| Reviewed by Lew Duffey |
9/6/2006 |
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Some say it is a necessary evil. We surely won't long in this world without it. Your poem is reminiscent of the words of Jesus. The money is not evil, but the love of money is the root of all evil.
God Bless,
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| Reviewed by A PAX |
9/6/2006 |
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I still wish I had more of those than I have now...dollar bills, fives , tens, etc
very good write......and not at all offensive......
ahem
any spares send them my way :)
am I the obnoxious American yet muuhaahaaa
e pluribus unum
A
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
9/6/2006 |
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In your quest for domineering goals
you made a monster that stole our souls
I can see why this caused a 'stink' - the truth often hurts!
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