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| Reviewed by Muhammad Al Mahdi |
3/16/2012 |
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| Intriguing. Pain and healing when darkness is glowing bright. How to help her become like this? How to reach where no one reaches? |
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| Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU |
2/22/2009 |
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A poetic bouquet of Orchids sparkling morning dews ~ glowing like an eighteen carats flawless brilliant cut diamond.
"A Naked Woman with Skin of Thorns and Ice" is page of art and sublimity to enrich The American Fine Letters.
In admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU |
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| Reviewed by David Hightower |
2/11/2009 |
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Aberjhani - Sharp imagery expressing the human condition, ice for defense and thorns for offense(which wounds both attacker and victim), transformed to beauty and the "peace that surpasses all understanding" by forgiveness.
“Find your hearts so you can forgive and love yourselves.”
Filled with wisdom. - David |
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| Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper |
2/8/2009 |
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| quite a moving poetic story great poet |
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| Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G |
2/8/2009 |
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WOW! What stunning beautiful Poetry! Aberjhani!
I enjoyed every word, your hearts blessed "US" with!
Hope your Valentines Day is happy and special as you are to me...
"Forgiveness" is the Key to the real "inner happiness" we want to retrieve!
YOU said it clearly and strongly! love your vivid imageries!
WRITE ON!
Warmest of Blessings, Love and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Passion Lady SHEExooo |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
2/7/2009 |
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| finding freedom is first achieved through forgiveness .. very unique imagery and approach ... unfortunately, a message few will adhere to ... |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
2/6/2009 |
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Truly a deeply meaningful poem worthy of much more than a single reading. Thank you for sharing this gift, Aberjhani. Love and peace to you,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury |
2/6/2009 |
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| A beautiful message is contained in your poem. Amazing! |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
2/6/2009 |
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Powerful Masterpiece....wow....you are the master Aberjhani!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by richard cederberg |
2/6/2009 |
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Some strong imagery in this poet.
"You whining cow of a bitch!” I haven't heard this phrase since I lived with my parents. And it's true A ... forgiveness is pivotal to freeing the mind and spirit from verve enfeebling bondage. Good thoughts.
Blessings ... |
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| Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle |
2/6/2009 |
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Amazing poem,very well written,I enjoy reading it,take care
Edwin |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
2/5/2009 |
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The images your words paint are so dramatic yet rich in realism!
You work is always a gift, thank you...
Eileen |
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| Reviewed by Sandie May Angel-Joyce |
2/5/2009 |
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Great choice of words. A well-expressed poem!!
Sandie Angel :o) |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
2/5/2009 |
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Aberjhani,
Images of Bosch painting and Francis Bacon sculpture rush to mind blending with the symbols of suffering, pain and sacrifice, this rips us apart and puts us back together in the final healing "with pefumed light and ruby psalms." Excellent!
John |
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| Reviewed by Dale Clark |
2/5/2009 |
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A masterful piece, my friend, excellent work.
Your imagery is superb. I love the line:
“Find your hearts so you can forgive and love yourselves.”
It's everything important to happiness. |
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| Reviewed by Nordette Adams |
2/5/2009 |
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| Lovely, requiring many reads and thoughtful recitation. This Valentine's day is bringing out all sorts of spirits. Perhaps you'll have time to visit the thornless "Apology," written with many poets in mind. *smiling* Glad you got a kick out of "The Green Green Grass." |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
2/5/2009 |
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| Metaphors abound and forgiveness the enriched word of this marvelous poem. |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
2/5/2009 |
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Many a woman, like Odysseus wife Penelòpê, has lived a great part of her life spinning stories to survive.
The author poem is not just that, it is the raw pain, disillusion and at the end the rebellion not less painful, not less real.
Many authors have attempted to give words to that pain, very few has succeeded, *Aberjhani my friend, you are one that succeeded.
Always here
Georg
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| Reviewed by Miriam Center |
2/5/2009 |
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Exquisite image, and glorious words. But that's what I've come to expect and accept from you.
Miriam |
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| Reviewed by Bernice Angoh |
2/5/2009 |
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| Wao, this took me to another world, very entrancing your words and most beautifully painted! |
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| Reviewed by Marcia Miller-Twiford |
2/5/2009 |
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The torments of many a woman so artfully penned. What a joy it is to read your poetry my friend. The insight you show in this one is remarkable, you spoke to the core of me.
Big Hug,
Marcia |
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| Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain |
2/5/2009 |
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Aberjhani~!
Incredible image and penning . . . fantastic!!
Best Always,
Lance |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
2/5/2009 |
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Aberjhani,
Such pain in these lines ... a depth of emotion that rolls down my face as tears, reading them ... well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
2/5/2009 |
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Powerful writing, Aberjhani; nice to see you here! you've been missed, (((my friend)))! Very well penned; bravo!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D |
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| Reviewed by Laura Mckenzie |
2/5/2009 |
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| Wow what a talent you are Aberjhani I love the line "The wailing fragments of her shattered heart". Such depth and beauty in your work. Thank you for your comment on my poem. I see you've written so many books best wishes on your writing! Laura :) |
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