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| Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen |
5/15/2009 |
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engaging imagery herein, linda. great line, "the beauty unseen remains..."
sadly, "the wheel" will turn and all creatures must dance to that cosmic vib...
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
5/14/2009 |
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| This is felt and seen, Linda. Sorrow, deep sentiment with a loving nostalgia all combine to make this a very compelling and moving poem. Superb flow to your words as your anguish seems to drive your pen onwards. Your love for this place gives the feel of the desolation, perhaps even guilt, that you feel at having to leave it to its fate. And your whole essence seems to know and intertwine with its very fabric. Beautifully rendered and expressed. Bless you, Kate xx |
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| Reviewed by Axilea Uzumcuoglu |
5/10/2009 |
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Strong and beautiful,
written in a way that leaves
the reader breathless.
Axilea |
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| Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green |
5/8/2009 |
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| M a r v e l o u s !! :) |
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| Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle |
5/7/2009 |
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A well written poem,excellent work,take care
Edwin |
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| Reviewed by Denise Edwards |
5/6/2009 |
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| Sad and meloncholy feelings well up in me from your powerfully expressive words. Profound! |
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| Reviewed by Dallas D'Angelo-Gary |
5/6/2009 |
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| This is magnificent! I love your use of imagery. |
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| Reviewed by Dale Clark |
5/6/2009 |
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| So moving and bitter-sweet... it touches me quite profoundly, Lin! |
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| Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis |
5/5/2009 |
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| This is very effective, artistic, sincere writing. Your words create a painting in my mind. I particularly love "that follow the sun into windows will look for me in the halls." |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
5/5/2009 |
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| A very sad requiem, Linda. I hope much better days are ahead. |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
5/5/2009 |
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Any requiem will be shrouded with sadness, then again, if love was there that sadness will have a secret smile at knowing that peace was declared in another place after a bid for eternity.
A poem to read and ponder.
Georg
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| Reviewed by Dawn Wilson |
5/4/2009 |
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| You have written this so eloquently...I am speechless. |
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| Reviewed by Pierre Ortega |
5/4/2009 |
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"And a bid for eternity" Isn't that all any of us have to make?
Pierre |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
5/4/2009 |
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So very meloncholy as if time is running out. I pray that you are okay....
Be always safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
5/4/2009 |
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| beautiful writing but i sense a depth behind these lines that is very sad--be well, my friend |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
5/4/2009 |
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| strong imagery reinforces the sorrowful conclusion to a quite well written poem ... |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
5/4/2009 |
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Linda,
This poem sings, sings beauty and lament, loss and pain, the details so rich and vivid, and the fluency of expression is masterly.
A real beauty!
John |
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| Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER |
5/4/2009 |
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Every line is washed in deep dark hues of life and sadness at the end, and a beautiful place too it is to be sad about!
Bless ya! Jasmin Horst |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
5/4/2009 |
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Supreme sadness for beauty lost.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Gene Williamson |
5/4/2009 |
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Linda, leaving home has never been said so well.
Every line a line to be admired and emulated (if one
has the skill to do so). -gene. |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
5/4/2009 |
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This work speaks with a powerful voice and although there is a sad feeling in the lines there is also a wonderful quiet dignity of what it all means in the grande scheme of things.
hugs
Fee |
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