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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
6/26/2009 |
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Interesting and engagin, Lin. Thank you. Love and best wishes,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
6/22/2009 |
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A vivid depiction of the volcanic eruption of love and lust, who by the fire of passion.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Pierre Ortega |
6/22/2009 |
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I love the presence and duality of this write.
enjoyed this
Take care, Pierre |
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| Reviewed by Suzie Palmer |
6/19/2009 |
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A frozen fire!! Love it Lin!!
A superb contemplation of Geology!!
Love your energy!!
Love, Suzie xox :-D |
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| Reviewed by Michelle Mead |
6/19/2009 |
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| WOW- now I admit, when I first saw that title, I was expecting something totally different- this is fantastic writing, my favorite so far today. |
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| Reviewed by Dawn Wilson |
6/18/2009 |
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| "The fault is mine,"....my favorite lines! |
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| Reviewed by The Bear Paw |
6/18/2009 |
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Hi L.G., I think you should keep on contemplating if this is what it does to your pen! You have given geology another meaning... thank you for sharing this...
In Spirit,
Bear |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
6/17/2009 |
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Witness to a never ending flow of time and space so artfully portrayed...
Be always safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
6/17/2009 |
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| juxtaposition's just fantastic ... synchronized symbolism powerfully sizzles ... |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
6/17/2009 |
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Linda,
"The fault is mine" - what a line! And that's just one of many excellent lines and devices in this wonderful poem, up there with the very best. This is such a satisfying experience in every way.
John |
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| Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg |
6/17/2009 |
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| awesome word creation..fascinating look at this geology |
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| Reviewed by Sue Hess |
6/17/2009 |
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| this is wonderful, i am so glad i came back today |
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| Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis |
6/17/2009 |
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This is one of my favorites of yours. Exquisite writing, indeed. I particularly love:
"The fault is mine Earth cracks
and a need long diffused flows
from the fissures and here in liquid
I bubble and burst as pressured plates
shift
and move me
to desire..."
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
6/17/2009 |
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| very creative! a wonderful metaphoric kind of feel! |
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| Reviewed by Dallas D'Angelo-Gary |
6/17/2009 |
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| Outstanding, Lin! |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
6/17/2009 |
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Descriptive images come to life beneath your lines and words...could be taken for symbology of life and love or as just simple poetry of nature but either way it is stunning.
hugs
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| Reviewed by Paul Judges |
6/17/2009 |
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| Good poem ! |
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| Reviewed by Romantic Poetess Victoria L. McColley |
6/17/2009 |
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I would love to experience this!
Your words like a slow seductive dance arouse the senses
"Contemplating Geology" is wounderfully envisioned
Embraced~Embrassι
Vickie |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
6/17/2009 |
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Those that have witness by night the flow of lava moving to the sea in Hawaii will remember the hot air, the pungent scent, the red and yellow hues slithering among dark grays and coal blacks.
We, once, were part of it.
Georg
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