|Reviewed by Gerald Tate
|WOW, Great piece, keep it up Lin.
|Reviewed by Carol Grace
|What a beautiful story. Great job.
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|Amazing story, art and needlework. I love how your bold writing with such "simplicity" and clarity endorses the finery of the garment somehow... I can imagine the darting and weaving of all those feathers and agile minds of those captured birds. The repetitions speak of their song: the urgency, the energy. Very vital writing here, Linda. Strong, confident and packs a powerful punch. Thank you, Kate xx|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Resplendent with the simplicity of innocent love we see in many early oriental works. Beautifully done LLin, thanks for sharing!
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|I love the coat. It looks native American.
|Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
|Great imagery in your poem, but I agree with Patrick, don't let Ed find out....giggle. Your words unfolded like a romantic legend. Very well done.
|Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
|This is a work of beauty. Just don't tell Mr. Ed. Patrick|
|Reviewed by Liana Margiva
|WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva|
|Reviewed by Andy Turner
|Well told tale of bravery in the chin dynasty. Such a tale evokes thoughts of a martial artist fighting for his beloved, with nothing stopping him.|
|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|beautifully written--captivating for sure!|
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Captivating and left me awed...well done.
|Reviewed by Georg Mateos
|A memorable tale that have the spirit of Chinese old poets, legends, myths and romance not getting old as a new poet will give a transfusion of life drawn from own inspiration.
|Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
|Linda, not only is this wonderful writing, the imagery is beautiful!|
|Reviewed by Michelle Mead
|What beautiful imagery! The repetition is almost prayer or chant-like, and adds to the cultural depth that you've created in this poem. Great work~ Blessings, Michelle|
|Reviewed by John Domino
|Magnificant poetry! Amen to that!