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|Reviewed by Chris Davis
|I enjoy reading your poems, but I do not agree with this poem, corporations do not have wants, a corporation may be similar to god, in that it does not account for anything outside of its world, it is its own world. I think this one needs tweaking, it misses the point, because it displays nothing but anger and emotion through scare tactics.|
|Reviewed by Jeremy Vaeni
|Wasn't the church the original corporation?|
|Reviewed by . ignis
|Corporations are the hellhounds of the occult hunters who aim to butcher this world. Their records are written with the blood of their victims whose ripped flesh rots between their fangs and talons. Their fake beauty is merely a vision inflicted on the blind who are unable to distinguish day from night. You expressed it prettier in this poem. Thank you for creating and sharing. Take care,
|Reviewed by Masood Lohar
I am soooo grateful that you have highlighted this, and that also in this very powerful way. You are so true that coporations have commodify not only us, our lives but also future generations. We have been enslaved and trapped to be away from God. We human kinds have lost the collective purpose of life and are gradually loosing our contact with God.
|Reviewed by Daniel McTaggart
|I'll bet a lot of guys sell their souls to Viagra. I've heard it's a company on the rise.|
|Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
|A most profound and powerful statement here.|