|Reviewed by P. Lucas Christopher
|I am...awestruck. Simply amazing.|
|Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
|Mari...fantastic write....splendid verses....love n luck....BHUWAN
.through the lingering ache of
remaining in one position for too long
one of us agitates the
through years of paying homeage to the
fraudulent reflections we
saw in everyone else's eyes
while closing our own
|Reviewed by Zenith Elliott
|Very well done!!! ~Z~|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|excellent poetry, Maria ... you should write more often ...|
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|An excvellent write ...Mari
|Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore
|and that's the way marriage/long-term relationships must be, as people grow together, through the good times and the bad, the hard and the easy. awesome wordsmithing. great imagery. i'm a fan.|
|Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga
Amazing, you have me truly lost for words, it's like a movie playing so many true life dramas, your last stanza concludes the story line of so many. Beautifully captured what a talent Mari :)
|Reviewed by Dale Clark
|An outstanding form of poetic verse.
I love the style. That first stanza
sets the tone here. Excellent!
|Reviewed by Chanti Niven
|Completely unique and beautifully written. Exceptional!
|Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU
This poem, "insidious insouciance" is a deep philosophical and poetic depicting of emotions and reasons, poemized with energy of knowledge, and poetized with words of wisdom dictated by a heart that pumps science and wonders.
Blest be the eyes that read "insidious insouciance".
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|You are indeed a poetic soul, Mari. These verses say so much. Thank you for sharing this offering. Love and peace. Regis|
|Reviewed by Sue Hess