|Reviewed by Z McClure
|As I read this, I thought of the countless people I've brushed shoulders with, but then parted from, probably never to meet again.
I felt myself tense as I read the part about "waves splash endlessly against the bow". Strong visual imagery put me on board. For a moment, I was there.
|Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
|Excellent! I was thinking just the other day what a lonely sound a ship's horn can be [do they call it a horn? my ignorance on the subject v a s t}. Think I feel another 'lonesome' poem comin' on.
T h a n k s !! You have left lasting images -- sounds, sights, and more -- with us, and that is no small gift!! 'Pea' <3
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
|Thoroughtly enjoyed the levels of writing here. Barely avoided conflict, coldness, and going their own way. Excellent. Liz|
|Reviewed by . . (Reader)
|I enjoyed the way you presented your verse here. The familiarity of the vessels, the atmosphere in transition, the parting; each thought fits spot on. Very good writing, a pleasure to read.|
|Reviewed by Art Sun
|Many relationships are as the expressions of your poetic display of expression...a very nice work...
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Symbolically meaningful of events that happen in our lives, Helen; powerfully thought-inciting; your verses quicken my breathing. You did well. Thank you. Love and peace to you,
|Reviewed by Michael Mathieu
|Like our lives, we pass each other with nowhere to go...
Staring straight ahead...
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Quite haunting, and quite good, Helen.|
|Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
|Nice write...enjoyed, could feel the waves within the write...great imagery! Enjoyed this much!