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| Reviewed by Zach McClure |
3/7/2008 |
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As I read this, I thought of the countless people I've brushed shoulders with, but then parted from, probably never to meet again.
I felt myself tense as I read the part about "waves splash endlessly against the bow". Strong visual imagery put me on board. For a moment, I was there.
-Zach |
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| Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green |
7/5/2007 |
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Excellent! I was thinking just the other day what a lonely sound a ship's horn can be [do they call it a horn? my ignorance on the subject v a s t}. Think I feel another 'lonesome' poem comin' on.
T h a n k s !! You have left lasting images -- sounds, sights, and more -- with us, and that is no small gift!! 'Pea' <3 |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Price |
5/25/2007 |
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| Thoroughtly enjoyed the levels of writing here. Barely avoided conflict, coldness, and going their own way. Excellent. Liz |
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5/12/2007 |
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| I enjoyed the way you presented your verse here. The familiarity of the vessels, the atmosphere in transition, the parting; each thought fits spot on. Very good writing, a pleasure to read. |
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| Reviewed by d. krusky |
4/20/2007 |
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Very well pieced together write. It most certainly stirs up thoughts of how separated, yet united we truly are in this world. There was a sameness at some point, then away it went. Great work!
Smiles,
Dorothy |
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| Reviewed by Art Sun |
3/18/2007 |
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Many relationships are as the expressions of your poetic display of expression...a very nice work...
enjoyed.....Art Sun... |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
3/17/2007 |
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Symbolically meaningful of events that happen in our lives, Helen; powerfully thought-inciting; your verses quicken my breathing. You did well. Thank you. Love and peace to you,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Michael Mathieu |
3/16/2007 |
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Like our lives, we pass each other with nowhere to go...
Staring straight ahead...
Well said,
Michael |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
3/16/2007 |
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| Quite haunting, and quite good, Helen. |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bowling |
3/16/2007 |
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Nice write...enjoyed, could feel the waves within the write...great imagery! Enjoyed this much!
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling |
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