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Love Will Endure
by Darcey Denise Patil
Thursday, February 10, 2005
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Love Will Endure

Can the sands of time bring your distant memory back to me,
Can Mother Nature contain your fury and keep you miles beneath the sea.
The sun between us shines his glory, his majesty, his might,
The moon cradles you with the cool breeze and sweet kisses in the night.
My love for you stands the test of time, for only then shall we see.
Not just for the moment, but for all eternity.
I wake up in the night, I'm lost and all alone,
No words or emotions, my heart feels like it is made of stone.
The ones I love can not share their love for me,
The stars above me the ground below, keep me company.
I'm misunderstood and loathed by so many...
You were my first love and always my last.
Forgive me my love.
Come back to were you once belonged.
Let our house become a home.
Make everything right that is wrong...
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Reviewed by Donna Quesinberry 2/11/2005

love-humphf-go figure.

nice writ.

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader) 2/11/2005
I agree that true love does indeed endure and when you find don't let go.
Reviewed by Phillip William Allen 2/11/2005
True love does right the wrongs. wtg
Reviewed by E T Waldron 2/10/2005
Very hearfelt prose, well written. Welcome to AD!;-)

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