by Eddie Arce
Thursday, February 10, 2005
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Unspoken love your eyes reveal
Your heart you give, my fire you steal
Timeless void amidst my soul
Our night's host, now love’s made whole
This sacred shore, moonlit waves collide
Evening stroll became midnight’s ride
So far from home and all whom we know
Avowed, our heart’s foretaste control
Mystic colors reveal night’s fading thrown
To awaken first light, dawn’s crescendo
Morning rain descends from the new born sky
Glistening droplets shattering in time
Under crystal downpour there we lie
Discovered by love yet lost in each other’s eyes
Oh fauvism depths of serenity’s flights
Infusing dreams emit your enthralling eyes
These depths of love refined in me
Intricate scores play as passion sings
Our secret passage, its key we kept
Where destiny transpired the day we met
Fulfilling vivacity a love so innate
My soul reborn with five and eight
This timeless oath my gift to you
Your love to me, an eternal jewel
A dream yet achieved, you have fulfilled
My world of light you brighten still
Immeasurable love, conceived in me
That all have dreamed and you alone will see
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|Reviewed by L. Figgins
|Unbelievably beautiful! You could be a poet of the Royale Court. Eddie, you don't need my help...you need an expense account and two secretaries-one on the phone and one to handle correspondence!|
|Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz
Am I glad that your comments on "Opposites Retract" brought me to
your beautiful poetry.
If you can pen things like this at 18...you are going to make
one big mark in the world of literature, Eddie.