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|Reviewed by Eddie Arce
|ahh- typo - glad you caught it, thank you.
|Reviewed by Sue Hess
|fantastic. you write very well. in the third verse, reined as you used it should be reigned, should it not? or was that a play on words?|
|Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
|I found the verse about the moon stallion really intriguing.|
|Reviewed by Al Swanson (Reader)
|nice write Eddie, third verse didn't have it though, not like the others, Al|