A Sight To Remember
by MaryGrace Patterson
Tuesday, December 19, 2006
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A Christmas poem with an unusual participants. I have written a childrens story based on the poem,and hope to have it published next year.
I was looking out my window
on Christams Eve night. Low
and behold I saw such a strange
and wondrous sight!
I saw Santa in his sleigh,
but no reindeer were in sight,
instead it was pulled by
flamingos, and they were in
Each was in harness with jingle
bells attached. They wore long
red stockings and fine Christmas
I saw them stop at each house
on our street. They waited
patiently while Santa delivered
When he came to our house, I
pretended to be asleep. I heard
him leave , and into his sleigh
I heard Santa shout, calling
each name. They started to move
and were soon flying again.
Santa called out as they flew
out of sight, "Merry Christmas
South Florida on this very special
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|Reviewed by Asa Seeley
|a 'warm' change and a story I hope many will one day enjoy. thanks for sharing
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Flamingos can be very symbolic and this is a nice take on them, MaryGrace. Thank you. Love and peace to you,
|Reviewed by J M
|Loved it LOL.... I always believed in Santa when Little but as I grew i met the maker of Santa. Then My views changed for this Seasons Reason but the fondness of childhood still was wonderful.Wonderful work MaryGrace
|Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
|Good luck with your story. Glad Mr Ed liked it, he's madly in love with flamingos. Victor|
|Reviewed by Debby & Gordon Rosenberg
|luv it...i'm envisioning a neighbors lawn ornaments coming to life and lifting off into the night...|
|Reviewed by Joyce Hale
|LOL I love it, MaryGrace!! Well done!
|Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks
|Flamingos seem to be appearing all over A.D.! A clever idea for these beautiful birds to pull Santa's seligh all around Florida :o)
Should make a delightful children's story...
Merry Christmas Mary Grace...
|Reviewed by Connie Faust
|Who'da ever thunk it? A novel concept which should be a hit with children, or my name isn't Grammy!
I do wish Santa would have called them by name, though...On, Pinky, on Fluffo, on Feathers and Jetstream.....
It's a fun poem.
Best wishes with it.
|Reviewed by Michael Mathieu
|Well done, still thinking about those flamingos.
Merry Christmas to you and yours,
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|You really got my attention with this one, MaryGrace - Flamingos pulling the sleigh - marvelous!! And best of luck with the short story; that sounds marvelous, too.|