by Debra A. Barone
Saturday, April 23, 2005
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She digs in with her shovel mouth and speaks untruths of you and I this woman you love this woman you left your life for and you feed her fodder for her shovel to feed your own ego the two of you caught up in your lies and deceit and I unwillingly become your scapegoat a web trapped bug your little monkey in the middle and three’s a crowd so you keep her hungry for your words for the sake of your pride for your inadmission of who you really are Go live in your opalescent dreams your never never lands your fantasy farms I’ve moved out long ago ducked out untangled myself tired of midwifing your ego I am still I am quiet humbled by my reality grabbing, holding on to that which is real, honest and true
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|Reviewed by Barbara Terry
|OMG Debra, this is what I had said about my mother, who threw me away, literally, to state authority. Then lied about the reason, but bragged ashe had a son. What she didn't wish to admit was, she never had a son, but a daughter in a male body. She never loved, cared or showed affection. Thnx for sharing Debra, this is so true. May the Lord Jesus bless you and yours, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie
"If I have to be this girl in me, Then I may as well be."
|Reviewed by christina waldman (Reader)
|Good job of stating your position with dignity, Debi, in the face of a great deal of spitting on holy matrimony that has been going on here for some time in the name of "love" and "poetry." The only writing worth reading comes from character and integrity, in my humble opinion.|
|Reviewed by Henry Stevens
|A poem telling really what is going on in straight up talk and words. A different approach, but done in a voice that is compelling and believable. Good Work. Henry|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|very compelling poem ... i can see you had your fill of hungry lies ...|
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Wow this is one reality poem that is brutally honest in it's message. Good and righteous words that I'm sure are spoken with conviction.
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|A very meaningfully compelling offering, Debra. Well expressed and shared. Thank you. Love and peace to you. Regis|
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|Ah, this is so excellent, so powerful and insightful, absolutely loved this! Deeply and powerfully moving,