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i wrote this fast too
by Richard Christopher Criso Suarez

Thursday, July 20, 2006
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i wrote for an isalnder friend




As far as what happened


the first time my eyes connected with yours


I am will never understand


never come close to being quite sure


the planet seemed to stop


you words mesmorized me and


your beauty left me shocked


when you open your mouth


I flipped out


I couldnít stop smiling and nor could you


all the while you were saying crazy senseless things


things from no w on I would not live with uot


so wild but we both new


it made no difference


Your voice was the soothing noise


I had always needed to hear.


And all in a moment I knew it


I loved you


and I saw the same in your eyes


and all you did to keep there


was a paradise



I left the store in a daze


I went home and immediately


returned to find you


locking up the place


again


smiles filled our faces


and it wasnít what we spoke about


it was what we knew without a doubt


we walked all night


and until we reached the shore


it was three am or more


and we walked to darkest part


and began to kiss and touch as if we


knew every inch of one another


and we did


and now you are all to me


my best friend


my perfect mate


who can say


only he


and he will


if you believe;


jesus love saves the day!


Copyright © criso



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Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot 9/19/2006
Interesting write, as fee says intense too, which goes to show, you never know what is around the corner for your life, i found that out :)
Love Ch'erie
Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G 8/22/2006
WOw, I felt intensity, excitement and Wonder in your words Rich! I had to be away for family Health issues, with my mom, it is still going on and I will do what I can! -Amen- I missed reading you and so many, I enjoyed this immensenly and I hope the happiness, love and Trueness in the relationship is still running Strong! Keep on Writing! I love how you share! Love, Light and HuGs, *She*ox
Reviewed by richard cederberg 7/25/2006
The love of Jesus Christ will indeed save the day anywhere, anytime.
In line 12 there are some misspellings!

I believe the writer would be better served if the formatting of the construct would adhere more rigidly to formal editing.

The ideas are "real" and executed in a heartfelt way.

Benisons

Richard Lloyd Cederberg
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 7/21/2006
Thanks for sharing!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Felix Perry 7/21/2006
INTERESTING AND INTENSE.

Fee
Reviewed by Tami Ryan 7/20/2006
I can feel the intensity in this, Ricky. Your work continues to improve. (smiles)

Tami
Reviewed by Suzie Palmer 7/20/2006
"Your voice was the soothing noise
I had always needed to hear."
Wonderful Rich! A glorious celebration and union!! Thanks for sharing!
The Sufis say: "Let your ear lead you to your lover" and that is what you did!
Love & joy Suzie :-D
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