|Reviewed by nichole sevilla (Reader)
|Reviewed by Ingrid Khola (Reader)
|I have a confession to make, you know what it is so why go into details? LOL,LOL,LOL!|
|Reviewed by P.T. Mayes (Reader)
|Very good, very imaginative. Sandie, you have a nasty skill of tricking the reader, of making him/her feel little guilty for having imagined so much that wasn't there... and wonder at ourselves.|
|Reviewed by sany jackson (Reader)
|HAHA!!! Ididn't suspect that ending.great poem
|Reviewed by Masood Lohar
|Reviewed by Amira van Kerk
|Hehe... did not expect this ending.
|Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G
|You trickery Master of fools-Great imagery- Sandra, Let us have another in that wicked mind of yours,VERy - VERy clever! I am still putting off having a wisdom tooth taken out :( :) WArmly,Sheee|
|Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
|My goodness! You sure had me fooled! Well done, Sandra!|
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|Dang you, Sandie, QUIT FOOLIN ME LIKE THAT! Yep--you got me AGAIN! You are too clever for your own good...or I am dumb as a box of rocks. LOL
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)
|Reviewed by Paul Williams
|oooh Sandie you wicked lady, you had me fooled too, superb twist, excellent.
|Reviewed by Richard Christopher Suarez
Intense has just been re-defined!
You can write your B-tt off.
The ending made my heart pop into my stomach
and I am a man.
severe to the maximum...., but it's contents are a necessary read!
keep on keeping on ......and ever now AND then...
DANCE SISTER'- DON'T LET IT GET YOU DOWN'.
Rich Criso Suarez
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|LOVE it! Few times am I surprised, and I am surprised with the ending. Thank you :-) Fantastic write!|
|Reviewed by David Knight
|Just my sort of ending - unexpected.
I wonder how many dirty minds (like mine :) ) jumped to the wrong conclusion.
|Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU
Excellence in imagery supported by rhythm and contents, make
"The First Time", a first expression of literary strike of
the Major Art, enriching the golden pages of Poetry.
Keep on writing, Poet!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
|Reviewed by Mocha Sistah
|You are clever! I can totally relate. When through that myself but your imagery was so good that I didn't notice until the end of the piece. YOu are very excellent writer. Thanks for sharing.
|Reviewed by Dave Harm
|Very clever, I've got to go to the dentist and get my wisdom teeth pulled, this poem, I'm sure, will bounce in my head...|
|Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore
|alright, sandra. very, very well done, for real. this one had me breathin' short. thank you for that ending! the rest, much too close to too many girls' real 'first' experience. you are definitely a wordsmith of sublime distinction!|
|Reviewed by Roger Ochs
|you lead the reader down a Primrose path and then turn him around with a wink and a smile. This is wonderful misdirection.|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|very clever poem ... i was fooled to the end ...|
|Reviewed by Patricia Gomes
|I'm with Lisa - what a godblessed relief the end was. You got my hackles up, lady; I was all set to go beat up the dentist.|
|Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Every muscle in my body was tense, by the time I reached the end, and then you caught me completely off guard! But then I was happy and relieved.
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|A truly delightful ending to this epic experience, Sandra!|
|Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
|hello Sandra, this was fun and with a surprising ending, I don't know which would be worse for you, the dentist or a real big, well lets just say "life can be a pain. On your bio, David C, aka kung fu, love that poem, didn't know he was a poet also|
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|You catch the reader going in one direction as your words are made into a wonderful ploy and end with a happy surprise. Exceptional write.|
|Reviewed by Mark Mahoney
|What a very clever well written piece, right to the end then wallop...superb flow and a very well done, thank christ it was only a tooth, take good care...Mark x|
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
|Gosh! You had me fooled into thinking that this was a rape of the innocence...until the very end.
A captivating write!
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
|Reviewed by Nordette Adams
|Oh, my lord. You've just struck one of my phobias and fooled me too. You're a wicked woman. Mine would be kinkier because the DDS has to tie me down. LOL.|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|hahaha leave it to you clever sandie! Fantastc analogy, had me fooled!
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|Bloody good. Scared me a bit.
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Nice twist, Sandra. Thank you. Love and peace to you. Regis|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Damn you you had me with this one...it was so intense I thought he raped you!!
Just shows you what goes through someones mind whe in the wrong frame of mind huh?
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|excellent imagery and emotion, sandie; brava on a fine write! well done!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in america, karen lynn in texas. :D
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|You are an evil woman. I had my doubts, but now you have given me proof. Evil is thy name! Loved it Sandra.|